Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The Part 29

Flash Back Ends


Geet was floating in the sweet memories of the past when she suddenly heard Maan wince in pain breaking her trance and she saw him jerking his hand as he had by mistake touched the hot part of the Barbeque stick burning his fingers slightly. Geet immediately held his hand blowing softly at his fingertips trying to sooth his pain and hayee… as her gentle breathe touched his skin Maan started drowning in the divine sensation of his Jaan completely forgetting his surroundings, his pain, his everything as he gently floated into the heavenly feel of her gentle caresses and soothing care.



Geet: Ab kaisa lag raha hai (and Hayee… what was Maan to say he was simply drowning in her feel, Geet panicked on not getting any response and looked up but as she saw his slightly diluted pupils as if submerging in her care she blushed Blushing slightly shaking her head) Aap yahi rukiye mei dayai lekar aati hoon (Maan nodded as if in trance and she rushed downstairs to get the medicine)

(How are you feeling now.

You wait here, I will just get the medicine)


Here on the other Adi was fast asleep on the mattress where the poor guy had been ordered to stay so as to keep the house safe and sound from his murderous cooking skills hehe LOL.



Geet (couldn’t find burnol (ointment for burn wounds) in the first aid kit): Arey isme toh koi bhi ointment nahi hai, ap mei kya karoon (she wondered as she looked up to her Babaji for help when an idea clicked her Thumbs Up) Thank you, thank you sooo much Babaji (and thanking her favorite Babaji she rushed back to Maan with a toothpaste)

(Oh… the ointment is not in this, now what should I do?)


Maan (taken by surprise as his Jaan put toothpaste on his burn wounds): Toothpaste???



Geet (she looked up momentarily from her task of applying the toothpaste ever so soothingly to his finger tips): Aap bas toothpaste ka jaadu dekhiye, dard kaise minto mei gayab ho jata hai. (as she finished with her treatment) Ab kaisa hai?

(You just watch the magic of toothpaste, your pain will vanish in minutes

How is it now?)


Maan: Tum galat thi Jaan toothpaste mei jaadu nahi hai (and Geet’s face fell Unhappy worrying that her Maan was still hurting badly, when his next set of words rendered her completely speechless) yeh toh meri Mishti ke haato ka jaadu hai jo mera sara dard choo mantar ho gaya (he said with so much sincerity in his voice as he looked deep within her eyes as if feeling her soul that Geet was simply losing herself more and more into her Jaan, her Maan)

(You were wrong Jaan, toothpaste has no magic.

It is the magic in my Mishti’s hands that my pain simply vanished)


They remained like that for ages as if reading their soul via their eyes, as if their heart simply wished to submerge into one another and remain like that till eternity when Adi’s phone rang bringing them back to reality and awakening Adi.


Adi (super excited to see the caller): Hiii Pinky…

Pinky: Hiii Adi…


Maan and Geet too joined in with Adi as he put the phone on speaker.


Maan: Hi kiddo, how are you?

Geet: Hi Pinky


Pinky: Hi Bhaiya and Bhabhi. I am absolutely fine but getting bored and missing you all. (she said in a low tone and it pierced her bro’s heart)


Maan: Just a few more days Kiddo and we will all be together. (and Pinky’s face instantly lit up)


Pinky (super excited): I am sooo excited Bhai and I have sooo many stories to share (Adi was like “Kal toh itni sari batai thi, phir se“) par mei baad mei bataongi nahi toh Adi phir kahega I don’t let you all speak (she cribbed showing her tongue to the phone as if it was Adi hehe LOL and Adi frowned Angry knowing her while Maan and Geet simply giggled LOL at those two fighting kids) Acha yeh sab choriye aap bataiye, what are you guys up to.

( I am sooo excited Bhai and I have sooo many stories to share (Adi was like “Yesterday only she told so many, again”) but i will tell later otherwise Adi will again say that I don’t let you all speak (she cribbed showing her tongue to the phone as if it was Adi hehe LOL and Adi frowned Angry knowing her while Maan and Geet simply giggled LOL at those two fighting kids) Ok, leave all this you tell, what are you guys up to.)

Geet (jumping): Tumhe pata hai Pinky, Maan is making kababs and we are having Barbeque at the terrace.

(You know Pinky, Maan is making kababs and we are having Barbeque at the terrace.)


Pinky (cribbing): Arey yeh kya baat hoti hai, mere bina you all are enjoying (she pouted) par koi nahi mei bhi apne badala loongi. Since I have to miss Bhai’s mouth watering delicacies, you all have to face punishment, manjoor hai. (all gulped but  what was the option they had to agree to their angry kiddo)

( Arey this is not fair, without me you all are enjoying.

but never mind, I will take my revenge. Since I have to miss Bhai’s mouth watering delicacies, you all have to face punishment, do you all agree.)


Maan: Ab humari yeh majal ki hum sab mana kare (he said dramatically and Pinky laughed LOL at her cutie and sweetest bro)

(How can we even think of refusing)


Pinky: Acha toh aap sab ki punishment hai that whatever I say you three will have to do. (and they all obediently nodded their heads and as if Pinky could see from the phone she continued) Toh sab se pehele Adi (and poor Adi gulped) Do you know Bhaiya and Bhabhi that Adi makes ek dum awesome wala Khus soda shake (and Adi pulled up his imaginary collar)

(Ok, so your punishment is that whatever I say you three will have to do. (and they all obediently nodded their heads and as if Pinky could see from the phone she continued) So first Adi (and poor Adi gulped) Do you know Bhaiya and Bhabhi that Adi makes completely awesome Khus soda shake)


Maan (completely shocked): Adi can make something edible too (and Adi frowned at him while Pinky continued)


Pinky (thrilled): Arey haan Bhai, he makes the best mock tail, just try it once and I am sure you all will love it. So Adi’s punishment is that he makes the mock tail till the kababs are cooking and I will too make one for myself and heat the pizza. Will call you guys back on skype so that we can enjoy together as family (she beamed as she kept the phone and went to kitchen to get her brunch while Adi too headed downstairs to fulfill his punishment leaving our love birds all alone wink wink Wink)


Geet was wearing a fur jacket and gloves despite that she was almost shivering and as she snuggled more into her Maan, her tummy suddenly grumbled again, Geet made a baby face “Arey yaar bechari kya kare uske peet mei chuhe kood rahe the” and Maan simply shook his head as he spoke.

(Arey, what can she do, rats were jumping in her stomach)


Maan (thinking of something): Wait Jaan, I will just be back. (And Geet looked on curiously as to what her Maan was up to when he returned with garma garam Paneer Tikka and Geet’s mouth watered while her tummy jumped in excitement)


Geet just wasn’t able to hold the folk properly using her groves and her face fell as she wasn’t able to pounce on the tasty dish. Though she was feeling real cold she sighed that let it be she will simply remove the gloves when Maan held her hand. She looked into his eyes as if questioning “Kya hua Maan(“what happened Maan”) when he blinked his eyes as if conveying “Mai hoon na Jaan phir tumhe gloves utarni ki kya zaroorat hai” (“When I am there Jaan then why do you have to remove the gloves“), he knew how cold she would get. And as Maan lovingly fed his Jaan Geet was slowly but surely losing herself in his loving and caring gaze as she gently floated into flash back.



Flash Back


One day Geet and Maan’s classes had got over early as one of their teachers was on leave.


Geet (Really thrilled): Chalo Maan market chalte hai (Though Maan hated shopping or even going to market but he happily accompanied his Jaan as all he ever wanted to do other than computers was drool over his Mishti hehe LOL)

(Come on Maan, let’s go to the market)


They were roaming about in the market when all of a sudden Geet saw a person applying mehendi and she tugged at Maan.


Maan (raising his eyebrow): Kya hua Jaan. (What happened Jaan)


Geet (super excited almost jumping like a kid): Maan mujhe dono haato par mehendi lagani hai (Maan smiled at his cutie Jaan and took her over to get mehendi applied on both her hands.)

(Maan I want to apply mehendi on both of my hands)


Geet got a lovely delicate and intricate design put on both her palms with her Jaan’s name engraved in it. She blushed Blushing showing him his name on her hands while Maan smiled his magical smile at her and soon both were completely lost in each other.



Maan was drinking in his Jaan’s beauty without even baiting an eyelid while on the other hand Geet was slowly submerging in his loving gaze when the sound of a car horn broke their trance and both blushed Blushing to be so lost in each other openly drooling Day Dreaming over their love in the middle of the road.


They moved on a little further when suddenly Maan realized that he was walking all alone, he turned back to see his Jaan standing a couple of steps behind staring dreamily at something. Her mouth slightly ajar as she almost drooled over the object of fascination and Maan turned his gaze as a prang of jealously touched his heart that what was it that his Jaan was gapping at with her mouth wide open but when he saw the source of his Jaan’s drooling, he simply shook his head at her cute child-like antics as a beautiful smile spread across his lips.



His Mishti licked her lips as she stared at the mouth watering golgappa stall without even blinking while his heart skipped a beat wanting to feel her rosy red lips as she slowly almost teasingly licked them. He groaned in desperation while his Jaan didn’t even have the slightest of idea what her innocent actions were doing to his heart and thoughts. When her tummy grumbled loudly as it too wanted to taste those delicious golgappas breaking his trance and he somehow controlled his urge to kiss his Mishti breathless as they were in the middle of the road and somehow controlling his erotic thoughts he went to his Jaan.


Here Geet made a baby sad face as she looked at her mehendi covered palms and then greedily at the golgappas… hayee… her heart cribbed she so wanted to eat those yummy golgappas but alas… and she sighed making a cute sa, sad sa baby face with big big puppy dog eyes and hayee… Maan just couldn’t control himself and pulled her adorable cheeks. Geet looked up at him with those sad puppy dog hazel eyes and he just grabbed her wrist and took her to the stall.


Geet (showing her hands in a sad whimper): Par Maan how will I eat I have mehendi na (she cribbed… hayee she looked so cute that it took Maan, his entire control to not kiss her sweet red cheeks and cute red nose.)

(But Maan how will I eat I have mehendi na)


Maan (blinking his eyes): Mei hoon na Jaan (and Geet was a little confused Confused as to what he meant when he asked the stall Bhaiya for the golgappa and very lovingly fed his Jaan with his hands and hayee… Geet just couldn’t help but fall more and more in love with her Maan as her heart flip flopped hayee… golgappa and she merily enjoyed her tasty mouth watering dish while Maan toh was simply lost in his Jaan drooling openly at her child like antics as she relished each bite.)


Flash Back Ends


Adi spoke breaking Geet’s trance bringing her back to reality as Maan so very lovingly fed her Paneer Tikka.


Adi: Tada… see I got the mock tails and the lappie too, to chat with Pinky.


Precap: Maaneet moments Wink


Hum Bewafa Hargiz Na The Part 28




Geet snuggled more into Maan bringing him back to reality and he smiled seeing her cuddling when her tummy grumbled loudly and both Maan and Adi were taken by surprise while Geet made a baby face with puppy dog eyes ki ab woh kya kare (what can she do) her tummy was like a hungry baby always growling na and hayee… Maan simply adored his cute si, nautaki si, adorable si Jaan and he was once again lost openly drooling over his Mishti, on the other hand getting no response Geet’s tummy pouted arey yeh kya baat hoti hai, yahan mei bhook se mara ja raha hoon (What is this, here I am dying of hunger) and he is giving no reaction and it grumbled even louder while a confused Geet tugged at Maan’s jacket bringing him out of his dream land and he blushed Blushing slightly “Oops” he was lost once again when Adi spoke.


Adi: How about we make Barbeque (and Geet’s face lit up and hayee… Maan was just about to get lost drooling once again when his brain somehow controlled his beqaboo (out of control) heart not wanting those two to tease the hell out of him especially after having just got caught downstairs.)


Maan: Chalo (Come) I will make different types of kababs (and his Jaan shrieked in delight and all the three got going to collect all the stuff from the kitchen and set the terrace for a barbeque night out)


And they soon set up the Barbeque with Maan being the head chef, Geet his assistant while poor Adi was strictly restricted to being the audience ordered to sit far away.


Adi (cribbing): Yaar, yeh kya baat hoti hai bhala, mujhe bhi dekhna hai aur help karni hai.

(This is not fair, even I want to see and help)


Maan: Ji nahi (No way), we don’t want to burn down the entire house… (and Geet couldn’t agree more especially after what happened to her dear omelet)


Geet: Yupp exactly, you aren’t coming even in a two feet radius of the Barbeque stand (Adi made a puppy dog face but no effect on either of them) Nothing doing, this is your punishment for ruining my beautiful omelet (waise Arpi wondering from which angle was it beautiful, par chado…) (Poor Adi just sighed as he sat quietly, far away from the action, still trying to curiously peep in from his boundary hehe LOL)


And as the kababs started roasting, the heavenly smell made Geet nostalgic as she went back into flash back.


Flash Back


Geet’s “personal heater” gifted her with his jacket and finally she got down from his lap and moved back to her original position even as the entire gathering was simply stunned at our naive Geet’s unintentionally bold statement “Woh… Maan is my personal heater na…” watching them with their mouths wide open when Maan cleared his throat to bring all the zombies back to Earth.


Maan (clearing his throat): Ahem… Ahem… guys… (still no reaction, so he raised his voice) guys (and finally he was able to break through their hot imaginations and they dropped back to ground)

Pari was the first to regain composure and spoke so as to prevent her friend from more embarrassment as she knew Geet had no clue of what she had just blurted out.


Pari: Chalo, let’s all play “Passing the Parcel”. Arun you will play and music and we will pass around this cushion. The person who has the cushion when the music stops, will have to do whatever he is told.


All were super excited as they started playing “Passing the Parcel” and they started passing around the cushion. But as the cushion reached our dear Maan the song changed to


Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein haye
Nainon mein haye

Taakte rehte tujhko saanjh savere
Nainon mein basiya jaise nain yeh tere
Nainon mein basiya jaise nain yeh tere


And as he turned to his side to pass the cushion to Geet their eyes met and he was slowly but surely drowning in her hazel eyes losing his senses to his Jaan. Initially Geet was tugging at the cushion but soon she left it and was also completely lost in his chocolate eyes.


Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain

Tere mast mast do nain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Mere dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain


Maan’s heart was fluttering as he gently started flowing into his dream world dreaming about his Mishti while Geet’s heart too missed a beat sensing him all lost in her.



Pehle pehal tujhe dekha toh dil mera dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye
Pehle pehal tujhe dekha toh dil mera dhadka haye dhadka dhadka haye


When to her horror the music suddenly stopped and all started giggling LOL at how the love birds were lost in each other breaking Geet’s trance but our hero… hehe LOL he toh was still floating in his paradise far far away from reality.


Geet (whispering in his ears, as she turned totally red, blushing real hard Blushing at been caught admiring her Maan): Kya kar rahe hai aap, all are staring at us (she said shaking him slightly finally breaking his dreaming session and now it was Maan’s turn to blush Blushing as the folks giggled all the more hehe LOL)

(What are you doing, all are staring at us)


Pari: Arey toh Bhai ab batao humare Majnu (and hayee both Maan and Geet blushed Blushing this was the nth time they were getting caught by their friends and all because of Maan’s fluttering heart but it pouted making a baby face Arey yaar samjha karo apni Jaan ko dekh kar us bechare se control hi nahi hota na hehe LOL) oops mera matlab hai Maan se kya karwana hai…

(So guys now tell what should we get done from our Romeo (and hayee both Maan and Geet blushed Blushing this was the nth time they were getting caught by their friends and all because of Maan’s fluttering heart but it pouted making a baby face Come on understand guys, he just can’t control itself after seeing his Jaan hehe LOL) oops I mean Maan…)


Aman (jumping raising his hand): I know… I know…


Pari (frustrated, ab pata hai toh bol bhi na types (If you know then tell types)): Kya…


Aman: Maan will make Barbeque for all of us… what say guys…


And all instantly agreed as they all knew what an amazing cook Maan was. He too had no problem except that his heart wined Unhappy arey yadi woh wahan door jake barbeque banayega toh uski Jaan ko kaun niharega (Come on, if he would that far away to make barbeque then who would admire his Jaan) hayee… it almost sighed when an idea clicked him.


Maan: Acha theek hai (Ok fine) I will make Barbeque (and all screamed “Yay, yay” when he calmed them continuing) but it will be difficult for me to make so much food all alone na.


Pari: Haan, woh toh hai, phir… (Yeah that is right, then…)


Maan: How about I choose my assistant.


Pari: I think that is fair enough, what say guys…


Chorus: Pick anyone, so who will be the bali ka bakra (they questioned each other when Maan spoke)


Maan: Geet will help me (and Geet blushed Blushing lowering her eyes while all just shook their heads obviously he needed no assistant but his Geet to drool over and they giggled LOL knowing his intentions pretty well while Geet blushed Blushing all the more where as Maan’s heart fluttered hayee… he would so happily drool over his Jaan with no one to disturb him Day Dreaming)


Pari: Par humari bhi ek shart hai (But we have a condition) (and Maan raised an eyebrow “Kya(“What”)) you will have to sing for us before you take your Jaan for the drooling (Maan’s cheeks turned as red Blushing as Geet’s) oops I mean Barbeque session. What say guys?


And all hooted and cheered for Maan and he wasn’t the one to disappoint as he sang for his Jaan.



Tu hi toh jannat meri, Tu hi mera junoon
Tu hi to mannat meri, Tu hi rooh ka sukoon
Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi jaanu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu


Ohhh hooo ohh….



Maan sang with so much sincerity in his voice, all the while admiring his Jaan, as if his heart meant each and every word of it.


Kaisi hai yeh doori, kaisi majboori
Meine nazron se tujhe choo liya
Oh ho ho Kabhi teri khusboo
Kabhi teri baatein
Bin mange yeh jahan pa liya

Tu hi dil ki hai raunak, Tu hi janmo ki daulat
Aur kuch na janoo, Bas itna hi janoo
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai, Yaara mein kya karuo
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karuo


His soul truly worshiped his Geet from the bottom of his heart and simply wished to bow down to her for coming in his dark life and lighting it up with her smile while Geet was completely mesmerized by his truly divine and unconditional love.



Cham cham aaye, mujhe tarsaye
Tera saaya ched ke chumta
Oh ho ho… tu jo muskaye
Tu jo sharmaye
Jaise mera hai khuda jhumta

Tu hi meri hai barkat, tu hi meri ibadat
Aur kuch na janu, bas itna hi janu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai, Yaara mein kya karu


There was so much genuineness in his voice as if truly worshipping his Goddess that everyone was left completely enchanted by his heavenly voice as if all were floating in the divine world of those true lovers truly blessed to be witnessing such pure and unadulterated love.



The beautiful song in his melodious voice finally ended leaving all mesmerized by the depth of their undying love for one another and they broke out clapping as tears brimmed their eyes to be honored to feel such magical love.


As the clapping finally mellowed down Maan got up and gently forwarded his hand for his Jaan who eagerly took his hands in hers to get up but as soon as their hands touched she was shocked to find his hand absolutely cold and tears welled up her eyes. As they moved a little further from the bonfire Geet spoke up.


Geet (overwhelmed with emotions): Aap ko kitni thand lag rahi hai, meri bewakoofi ki wajah se aap ne apni jacket bhi utar kar mujhe de di (and a tear escaped her eyes and Maan immediately cupped her face wiping her tear)

(you are feeling so cold, and because of my stupidity you gave me your jacket as well)



Maan: Nahi Jaan isme tumhari koi galti hai. (No Jaan it’s not your fault)


Geet (making a baby face): Yeh sab us chudail ki wajah se hua hai (she said cursing the witch to have caused so much pain to her Maan while he was completely taken aback)

(Yeh, all this happened because of that witch)


Maan (completely shocked): Chudail, kaun si Chudail (Witch what witch)



Geet: Arey wohi wali jis ke bare mei conductor Bhaiya bata rahe the, issi liye toh mei apni jacket lene tent akele nahi jana chahati thi na, yadi woh mujhe pakar leti toh… (she said making cute baby expressions and hayee… Maan had a tough him controlling his giggling LOL at his Jaan’s adorable antics while his heart toh just wanted to get lost in her again Day Dreaming when she continued breaking his trance) Par ab toh aap mere saath hai na toh chaliye lets get my jacket from my tent nahi toh aap ko sardi ho jayegi (And hayee… Maan’s heart flip flopped his Jaan loved and cared for him so much na)

(Arey That one about which the conductor was telling about, that is why I didn’t want to go alone to the tent to get my jacket , what if she would have caught me…

But now that you are with me, come lets get my jacket from my tent otherwise you will catch cold)


And so amidst Maan’s mini drooling sessions they went to the tent to get the jacket before heading to set up the Barbeque.


They set up the Barbeque stand and Maan made his Jaan sit right in front of him.


Geet (surprised): But how will you make so much food all alone, let me help na.


Maan (blinked his eyes): Nahi Jaan, you just relax (he bowed down in style) Your head chef is there to take care of the Barbeque (she giggled LOL see him bow like a true performer while he winked Wink at her before continuing) Waise bhi meri Mishti toh sabse important kaam kar rahi hai (and Geet got all confused “Kya” she asked raising her eyebrow) Arey meri Jaan hi toh meri inspiration hai jise dekhe bagair mujse kuch hota hi nahi (he said huskily and hayee Geet blushed Blushing lowering her eyes)

(And anyways my Mishti is doing the most important work.

Arey my Jaan is my inspiration without seeing whom I can’t do any work)


And as Maan started with the preparations the following song played in the background as the “Passing the Parcel” game continued a little far from them.



Hoo tora saajan, Aayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan, Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan, Aayo tore desh

Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Pyaar ka, Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka
Bahara bahara, Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara, Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara, Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee


As if depicting the inner depths of Geet’s heart as she sat there completely lost in her Maan and his immense love admiring him while Maan too was stealing glances at his Jaan. His heart flip flopped seeing his Mishti drooling over him and hayee… he felt over the moon today as he continued preparing the best kababs ever.



Flash Back Ends


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Will His Pure Love Change Her Hatred Epilogue



Maan got their food and he gently adjusted his Jaan as he so lovingly fed her and she too fed him in return and they continued to pour their true, pure and divine love completely lost in one another.


They remained like that till eternity before it became really chilly and Geet was almost on the verge of shivering and Maan very lovingly carried her to the room he had especially reserved for them. But as he was about to open the door, Geet spoke.



Geet (slightly hesitant): Maan…


Maan (raising his eyebrows as to what happened): Haan Jaan…


Geet: Woh… woh… (shying slightly) If you don’t mind can I go in first alone, then I will call you in.


Maan was taken aback but Geet pleaded him making big sad puppy dog eyes and hayee… how could he not melt. He blinked his eyes assuring her and gently made her stand on her feet.



Geet kissed his cheek in sheer excitement before rushing inside closing the door behind her and hayee… Maan was completely lost in the feel of her rosy lips as he held his cheek… completely submerged in the feel of his Jaan.


Suddenly the door opened and Geet peeped outside to find her Maan still lost in her feel holding his cheek and she giggled LOL seeing his state and imagining his condition after her naughty plans. Her chuckle broke Maan’s thoughts and he blushed Blushing slightly to have gotten caught again by his Jaan when to his surprise his Geet winked at him gesturing him to come inside and he simply followed her completely enamoured by his Jaan.


But as Maan entered the room he was in for a pleasant surprise. His Jaan had so beautifully, romantically and aromatically done up the entire suite that it seemed as if he had entered Heavens. He was totally smitten by his Jaan who stood in the center radiating light in the midst of the majestic candles and rose petals. She truly looked like an angel who had descended just for him and he was completely lost in her almond shaped eyes pouring his absolutely divine love on his Mishti.



Geet shied not able to meet his intense gaze and gently looked down, it was then that Maan’s eyes traveled downwards and he was completely blown away to see his Jaan in the white overflowing gown. OMG… she had planned to be death of him today as she very sensually dropped her gown to reveal her milky skin shinning in the red inners and Maan breathe was caught in his throat as a hoarse whisper escaped his lips “Jaan…” while Geet blushed seeing her effect on her Maan. She felt so proud that he loved her so much…


His feet as if on their own lessened the distance as he moved close to his Jaan all lost drinking her beauty via his eyes when his gaze fell on her scar and he almost jolted back from the crime he was about to commit and he simply froze. Geet was taken aback to see his halt abruptly and she looked up, but as soon as their eyes met all her unasked questions got answered as to what had happened all of a sudden and she spoke.


Geet (with a mischievous twinkle in her eyes even as she very innocently asked): Maan, can I ask for my birthday gift


Maan got mortally scared seeing that look in her eyes, he knew he could never deny her anything but not at the cost of her health and he kept quiet.


Geet (gently sliding her hands around her chest over his shirt from behind as she huskily whispered almost teasing his senses): Boliye na… do I get to relish my Jaan as my gift… (turning him towards her)


Maan (his eyes were drooping as he was slowly but surely drowning in the feel of his Jaan as her sinful hands traced delicate patterns all over him and he could meekly managed): But…


Geet (loosening his tie before she almost ripped it out and she continued teasing his senses as she very sensually opened his shirt buttons, gently grazing his toned muscles underneath creating a complete havoc in his senses): When did I ask you to do anything Jaan (Maan’s drooping eyes had the questioning look… as to what was her demand then…) I am toh only asking my right to love and savour my Jaan… you are totally free to control yourself and this way it won’t hurt me also…


Maan’s subconscious knew he was asking for trouble by agreeing to her request but somehow he was in no sane state of mind to think or protest anything as his Jaan literally threw his shirt far away feeling his taut chest and abs with her heavenly fingers leaving goose bumps all over his body via her delicate caresses and he could just nod for a yes.


18+ part begins

Her eyes shone in naughtiness as he gently nodded and she softly guided him towards the bed. She pushed him gently on it before climbing over him as her hands roamed freely over his bare chest and back and Maan simply closed his eyes… savouring the feel of his Jaan. Her sinful lips soon took over from her hands as she placed delicate feather like kisses all over him as he moaned her name in sheer ecstasy.


When suddenly he felt something cold touch his bare torso and he opened his eyes slightly to see his Jaan pouring chocolate sauce all over him. He was taken by surprise as her every ready mouth descended on his collar bone sucking, licking and nibbling the chocolate along with his delicate skin leaving her mark… as if marking him hers and he realized what exactly she meant by relishing him as her lips traveled down leaving her marks all over his chest as she softly nibbled and chewed him completely enjoying her chocolaty Maan and relishing him to her heart’s desire and he was completely lost in her feel moaning her name non-stop.


But her heart still yearned for more and she almost ripped out his belt pushing his trousers down in one go. Maan’s eyes literally popped out fearing how much longer he would be able to control as her sinful hands sneaked inside his boxers feeling his secret treasure and he hardened almost instantly as she softly caressed and stroked him. She pushed away his last barrier as her eyes shone in pure passion darkening with desire tracing delicate patters over him and he simply moaned her name in pure bliss.


She very lovingly rubbed his manliness caressing, fondling and rubbing him turning him on and Maan gripped the sheets tightly closing his eyes shut just not able to bear her teasing any more when to his utmost horror he felt her pouring the cold chocolate sauce over his core before her sinful lips and tongue started relishing him while her sinful fingers caressed his sides creating a complete havoc in his senses and his grip tightened on the sheets till his knuckles turned completely white.


Maan (his breathing got rugged as he withered under his Jaan’s extreme sweet torture. Barely managing to speak as a mere hoarse whisper escaped his lips): Please Jaan stop, I am losing my control… I will end up hurting you… please Jaan… (He barely managed to speak as his body almost shivered under his self control… jolting Geet out of her dream land… she didn’t even realize when she got carried so far away in her naughty and sinful plan. She had planned to just tease him but she completely lost her senses relishing her Maan and oops she went a step too far away and poor Maan had it… poor guy was literally trembling in desire.)


And as Geet finally stopped her sweet torture a tear escaped Maan’s eyes simply not able to bear her teasing, his entire being was pulsating and throbbing in need as his heart thudded loudly under his self control.


Geet immediately captured his lips trying to make it up to him but she felt him holding back because he no longer trusted his body, his senses, he knew if he let lose even a fraction then there would be no controlling back when she whispered in his ears.


Geet (faint whisper): Doctor messaged, I am completely fine now.


Maan instantly opened his eyes and looked deep into hers as if confirming what he heard was indeed true, as if seeking her permission and she blinked assuring him as if granting him his right and that was it. He instantly flipped her over, shedding her barriers as he urgently slid in her releasing himself engulfing her in a bone crushing hug, filling her with his love as she almost shrieked in pain and pleasure feeling him inside her and he immediately captured her lips soothing her… trying desperately to calm his quivering senses and it took him a good five minutes before his body finally stopped trembling such was the extreme torture his Jaan had bestowed on him.


Geet (extremely guilty as pearls threatened to fall from her eyes): I am really sorry Maan, I didn’t realize…


But Maan instantly captured her lips not letting her apologize. He looked deep into her eyes… assuring her… that he was her Maan… she had absolutely every right on him… in fact she toh owned him na… and how could she ever say sorry for loving him… he toh just loved it na when she loved him and his eyes smiled at her and finally she too smiled back free from her guilt.


He gently kissed assuring her and soon the soft kiss turned passionate with both biting, nibbling, licking and sucking each other as he slowly increased the pressure underneath and Geet shrieked in pure pleasure as he rocked her world filling her with his true love as they rode amongst the clouds before they both collapsed hitting their climax.


18+ part ends


Maan kissed her lone tear away and she smiled at him totally content to be his and only his when Maan mischievously winked eyeing her and she blushed all the more.


Maan (whispered huskily in her ears): Hmmm, you must be hell tired na so don’t worry I won’t trouble you more (he winked naughtily as he continued) But I will be relishing my Jaan soon (and he eyed her with his bed room eyes and Geet blushed a deep shade of red before hiding her face in his chest)


Geet snuggled into her Maan and he too cocooned her into his loving embrace before a peaceful sleep enveloped them.



As the early morning sun rays glittered inside their room Maan gently blinked his eyes to find the most adorable scene in front of him, his glowing angel was snuggling into him and he was completely lost in openly drooling over his Mishti. He was so lost in his Jaan that he didn’t even realize when he gently kissed her lips and she just snuggled more into him as if seeking his warmth almost wrapping herself around him and Maan smiled slightly.


16+ part begins

When suddenly her soft chest touched his rock solid one and he hardened almost instantly moaning her name.


Geet slowly blinked her eyes hearing him moan and a slight smile crept her lips feeling his arousal while Maan blushed Blushing, his body simply gave his crazy love for his Jaan completely away… and hayee… Geet so much adored her slightly blushing Maan as his cheeks went all red.


Geet (huskily whispered in his ears): Love me na Jaan.


Maan looked deep into her eyes and she shied away just not able to meet his intense gaze and soon they both were lost in another love making session exploring each other to their heart’s content.


16+ part ends


Couple of weeks had passed by and Geet was fully recovered now running and jumping all around the mansion.


Today Maan had somehow wrapped up his work by late afternoon itself and he headed home early in order to surprise his Jaan. He was about to announce his arrival when he saw his Mishti looking so gloomy and grumpy that it ripped his heart apart and he tip-toed close to her wanting to know the reason of her faded smile. He saw his Jaan gently caressing a newspaper ad before she let out a sigh and neatly folding the newspaper silently keeping it away even as her eyes had that distant feel of a dream long lost when Dadi called out for her.


Dadi: Geet beta, yahan aana toh jara…(Geet beta, please come here…)


Geet: Ji Dadi…


And she left leaving her sadness behind, maybe even her dreams, for her newly found family. But how was her Maan to let go and he instantly picked up the newspaper to see what his Jaan’s heart desired and a sweet smile crept his lips as he saw her dream and he vowed to fulfill her every wish and he immediately left to find his Jaan’s lost happiness.


It was way past dinner time when Maan finally came back home and both Dadi and Annie had long back retired to bed. As he slowly crept in from the main door he was totally blown away at the mesmerizing scene in front of him. His adorable Jaan was so cutely sleeping on the dining table resting her head on her stretched arm that hayee… he was completely lost in admiring his Mishti as he slowly approached her drooling openly at his innocent wifey. Almost as if in a dreamy trance Maan walked up to his Jaan and gently tucked in the lose strand of hair behind her ear totally smitten by his stunning sweet heart while Geet recognized his touch even in her sleep and she blinked her eyes to see her Maan and a beautiful smile crept her lips.


Geet: Aap aa gaye Maan… Chaliye mu haath dho lijiye, mei khana lagati hoon… (You came Maan… Come wash you face and hands, I will get the food)


And Hayee… Maan was completely blown away by his Jaan’s love and care, she never got angry at him even if he got late at night in fact she would be waiting for him at dinner… hayee… he was so lucky to have his angel in his life.


Maan (softly kissing his wifey): Naraz nahi ho Jaan, (Geet raised her eyebrow surprised) woh I came back so late…

(You are not angry Jaan, (Geet raised her eyebrow surprised) woh I came back so late…)


Geet (how could she ever be angry on her Jaan, her Maan after all he was her Jaan na, reciprocating his kissy): Mei janti hoon you must got caught in some important work tabhi toh you messaged na that you will get late.

(I know that you must have gotten caught in some important work that is why you messaged that you will get late)


Hayee… Maan simply scooped her off her feet as he deepened the kiss wanting to pour his entire love in that one single kiss and both were soon lost in kissing and feeling each other.


They broke apart after ages panting for breath and both chuckled at themselves to be so lost that they just forgot to breathe.


After they calmed a bit Geet was about to go get the dinner when Maan held her hand. She turned around surprised and raised an eyebrow as if asking “Kya hua” (“What happened“).


Maan simply placed a paper in her hand. Geet was curious as to what was in it and as she read the form tears of pure bliss rolled out of her eyes and she engulfed her Maan in a bone crushing bear hug and Maan too engulfed her lovingly.



They broke apart after ages and Geet suddenly became all confused and started bombarding poor Maan with her endless questions.


Geet: But how did you come to know that I wanted to take part in this couple dance competition. I toh didn’t even tell you (when she suddenly realized something) and this was why you got so late (and precious pearls threatened to pour from her divine eyes completely overwhelmed at his truly unconditional love)


Maan simply captured her soft lips not able to bear tears in his precious’s eyes.


Maan (feeling her finally calm down under his magical spell): I toh live in your heart na Jaan then how can I not know your heart’s desire (his voice was full of love as he looked deep into her eyes as if reading her soul and Geet was completely blown away at his absolutely divine love).



Geet (Suddenly worried): But Maan it will become so hectic na for you, how will you be able to manage dance rehearsals along with office. Let’s ditch the competition na, you thought so much that is more than enough for me Jaan. (She said, her eyes showering her absolute love on her Maan and he was totally blown away at her love and care but how could he not fulfil his Jaan’s wish)


Maan (gently shaking his head at his innocent and sweet Jaan, touching her forehead with his, looking deep into her eyes): Mishti… your each and every wish is my heart’s desire so we are not dropping the competition come what may and I promise you Jaan we will excel in it. (Geet tried to interrupt concerned about his health but he didn’t let her cut him) You don’t worry Jaan I will handle the office and worst come worse we won’t take any new project for a couple of months (and Geet was simply lost in his undying love for her as she hugged him truly overwhelmed at his never ending love)


The audition was in a month’s time and both Maan and Geet got down to business. Geet was an awesome choreographer who had knowledge of almost all the dance types in the world and poor Maan would be left scratching his head at the complex names she would keep muttering while trying to decide their opening performance. And finally she came up with some weird and complicated dance form name and Maan was like “what???


Maan (cribbing, not another weirdo name Babaji): Arey yaar English mei bol na… what was that… Rum… rum… (muttering to himself) Peena tori hai…

(Come on yaar, tell in English… what was that… Rum… rum… (muttering to himself) We don’t have to drink…)


Geet (hitting her head, her business tycoon husband was such a cribbing baby when it came to dance form names): Arey yaar Rum nahi… Rumba (\’r?m-b?) Jaan… it is just a romantic passionate dance if you so want in plain English.


Maan was like phew at last he understood something when his eyes twinkled naughtily “romantic“, “passionate” and he looked at his Jaan with bedroom eyes which was enough to make her go weak in her knees as she blushed a deep shade of red turning away from him just not able to meet this intense gaze.



Maan (placing his chin on her shoulder from behind and whispering huskily in her ears): Mishti, did I ever tell you how “edible” you look in this red blush of yours (and hayee… she blushed Blushing all the more if it was even possible)


When suddenly Dadi appeared from nowhere…


Dadi: Oops lagta hai hum galat time par aa gaye (and poor Maaneet instantly separated as a red blush caressed Maan’s cheeks Blushing while Geet toh was all sharam se pani pani and could easily beat the tomato in redness Blushing hehe LOL. Dadi tried to control her giggling as she continued with a straight face) Arey hum toh aivei hi kabab mei hadi ban gaye (she said winking Wink at them and hayee both were dying blushing Blushing) Acha chalo I won’t tease you guys, I just came to see how the preparations were going on, but you both carry on (she left naughtily winking Wink at them)

(Oops looks like I came at a wrong time (and poor Maaneet instantly separated as a red blush caressed Maan’s cheeks Blushing while Geet toh was all sharam se pani pani and could easily beat the tomato in redness Blushing hehe LOL. Dadi tried to control her giggling as she continued with a straight face) Oops I unknowingly came in between love birds (she said winking Wink at them and hayee both were dying blushing Blushing) Acha chalo I won’t tease you guys, I just came to see how the preparations were going on, but you both carry on (she left naughtily winking Wink at them))





As Dadi left them alone, Maan naughtily hugged her from behind grazing his hands over her exposed waist and Geet was like “Choriye na Maan koi aa jayega” (“Leave na Maan, someone will come“)


Maan (whispering huskily in her ears gently nibbling her earlobe and her breathe simply got stuck in her throat): I am only practicing our dance form Jaan (Geet was like hell confused Confused even as her breathing became rugged “practicing???” and Maan continued as if answering her unasked question) Haan aur nahi toh kya (What else) you only said romantic and passionate, I am toh just practicing that (and Hayee… Geet blushed Blushing completely red hearing her naughty Maan)


And so their romantic and passionate moments continued along with some dance (hehe LOL wink Wink blush Blushing) and soon it was the day of their audition and Geet was hell nervous while her Jaan was trying his best to calm her down.


Geet was pacing up and down in the green room for the past 30 minutes all decked up in the costume frustrating Maan, he was just not able to calm her down today. Finally seeing no other outlet Maan simply captured her soft lips in his rough ones leaving her completely breathless and totally speechless and soon she relaxed under his magical touch.


Anchor: Ramba by Maaneet


Depicting the story of two people destined to be together, how the girl was hesitant initially but finally his unconditional love and persistence prevailed and the soul mates eventually became one.


The host soon called out their name, yeah Maan had purposefully hidden the fact that Mr and Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana were performing as he knew Geet wouldn’t want them to win because of MSK tag rather he wanted to win it for his Jaan just as her Maan.


Maaneet stepped on to the stage and simply set it on fire by their mesmerizing performance.

Ramba By Maaneet – VM by my dearest friend Payal, enjoy their breath-taking dance on Raabta… There is no scope for words in midst their magical performance… hence I leave it to you guys to see and enjoy their astounding dance.

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As they finished their performance there was pin drop silence in the whole auditorium before all burst out clapping at their sensuous performance and all were raving about their sizzling chemistry and they got a direct entry in the top fourteen.


They kept on giving spectacular performances week after week and all were simply mesmerized by this perfect Jodi and soon Maaneet were tipped as the favourites to win the contest both by judges and audiences alike.


The final performances were over and Maan was pretty confident that they had nailed it while our Geet was a complete nervous wreck, when the judges announced that for the final day before the results were to be declared based on the marks and votes they wanted all the finalists to give a performance, it could be solo, couple or group whatever they wanted. And an idea clicked Geet and she opted for a solo performance leaving a bewildered Maan scratching his head and when he tried to ask her she confused him all the more.


Maan: Par Jaan why aren’t we performing duet.


Geet (declared): Don’t worry we both are there.


Maan (hell confused Confused): But how is that possible Jaan, you just opted for solo.


Geet (ruffling his hair): Arey we both will be there in the dance, you just wait and watch. (and left from there leaving a totally baffled Maan behind)


And so was the case the entire week whenever Geet was practicing for the finale dance if Maan would turn up, she would immediately stop dancing and music toh she just played in her ears really frustrating Maan with all this secrecy.


Maan (cribbing once again): Yeh kya baat hoti hai Jaan, tell me na what are you planning and you toh said we both are in the dance.

(This is not fair, tell me na what are you planning and you toh said we both are in the dance.)


Geet (shaking her head): Arey yaar wait for a couple more days na, you will soon come to know (and she winked Wink at him before leaving him all irritated)


And poor Maan finally gave up as he knew it was no use pestering her even though his stomach ached with all the suspense his Jaan had created.


Finally the day arrived for which Maan had been so eagerly waiting and it was Geet’s turn to give the performance.


As she started the act Maan was simply blown away seeing her give a tribute to his unconditional, undying divine love as she danced on “Tujhame rab dikhta hai” which his pictures playing on the background screen.


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na kuchh puchha na kuchh maanga, tune dil se diya jo diya

na kuchh bola na kuchh tola, muskura ke diya jo diya


She portrayed his unending and unconditional love via her dance, how he simply lived for her even when she hated him to the core. How he was always there for her come what may. How he always protected her even when she cursed him, how he bore all her abuses, all her accusations, on himself, how he suffered all her hatred yet kept smiling and pouring his absolutely divine love on her.


tu hi dhup tu hi chhaaya, tu hi apana paraya

aur kuchh na janu, bas itna hi janu


She depicted how grateful she was to him to have blessed her life by coming into it, for sucking away all her madness, all her hatred and filling her heart and soul with his pure love.


tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu

tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu

sajde sar jhukta hai, yaara main kya karu

tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu


She worshiped him in her act portraying that he was indeed her Babaji, her guardian angel who had descended from the Heavens just for her and she vowed to reciprocate his undying love with all her might.


rab ne bana di jodi haay…


And as the performance finally came to an end all were speechless while a tear rolled down Maan’s cheek witnessing his Jaan love and he simply jumped on the stage and ran and engulfed her in a bone crushing bear hug. Geet too reciprocated his hug completely lost in her Maan.



And the whole crowd erupted clapping witnessing the pure love of two divine lovers bringing them back to reality still Maan was just not willing to let go of his Jaan.


Geet (feeling embarrassed Embarrassed): Maan choriya na, sab dekh rahe hai. (Leave na Maan, all are watching)


Maan: Toh dekhane do I don’t care. (So what let them see, I don’t care)


Geet: Please Maan (Geet pleaded all sharam se pani pani Blushing)


Finally Maan let go of her but not before placing a kiss on her cheek and she blushed all the more.


Soon they announced that Maaneet had indeed won the prestigious competition and the celebrations knew no bounds as the whole Khurana Mansion was lit up and they celebrated in true grand style like true champions.


And as time passed by the pure love of the divine lovers blossomed and soon Geet gave birth to a cute little boy and they named him “Lucky” on Maan’s suggestion, truly “Lucky Bhaiya” had returned to complete their family and fill their lives with happiness.

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