Maan got their food and he gently adjusted his Jaan as he so lovingly fed her and she too fed him in return and they continued to pour their true, pure and divine love completely lost in one another.
They remained like that till eternity before it became really chilly and Geet was almost on the verge of shivering and Maan very lovingly carried her to the room he had especially reserved for them. But as he was about to open the door, Geet spoke.
Geet (slightly hesitant): Maan…
Maan (raising his eyebrows as to what happened): Haan Jaan…
Geet: Woh… woh… (shying slightly) If you don’t mind can I go in first alone, then I will call you in.
Maan was taken aback but Geet pleaded him making big sad puppy dog eyes and hayee… how could he not melt. He blinked his eyes assuring her and gently made her stand on her feet.
Geet kissed his cheek in sheer excitement before rushing inside closing the door behind her and hayee… Maan was completely lost in the feel of her rosy lips as he held his cheek… completely submerged in the feel of his Jaan.
Suddenly the door opened and Geet peeped outside to find her Maan still lost in her feel holding his cheek and she giggled seeing his state and imagining his condition after her naughty plans. Her chuckle broke Maan’s thoughts and he blushed slightly to have gotten caught again by his Jaan when to his surprise his Geet winked at him gesturing him to come inside and he simply followed her completely enamoured by his Jaan.
But as Maan entered the room he was in for a pleasant surprise. His Jaan had so beautifully, romantically and aromatically done up the entire suite that it seemed as if he had entered Heavens. He was totally smitten by his Jaan who stood in the center radiating light in the midst of the majestic candles and rose petals. She truly looked like an angel who had descended just for him and he was completely lost in her almond shaped eyes pouring his absolutely divine love on his Mishti.
Geet shied not able to meet his intense gaze and gently looked down, it was then that Maan’s eyes traveled downwards and he was completely blown away to see his Jaan in the white overflowing gown. OMG… she had planned to be death of him today as she very sensually dropped her gown to reveal her milky skin shinning in the red inners and Maan breathe was caught in his throat as a hoarse whisper escaped his lips “Jaan…” while Geet blushed seeing her effect on her Maan. She felt so proud that he loved her so much…
His feet as if on their own lessened the distance as he moved close to his Jaan all lost drinking her beauty via his eyes when his gaze fell on her scar and he almost jolted back from the crime he was about to commit and he simply froze. Geet was taken aback to see his halt abruptly and she looked up, but as soon as their eyes met all her unasked questions got answered as to what had happened all of a sudden and she spoke.
Geet (with a mischievous twinkle in her eyes even as she very innocently asked): Maan, can I ask for my birthday gift
Maan got mortally scared seeing that look in her eyes, he knew he could never deny her anything but not at the cost of her health and he kept quiet.
Geet (gently sliding her hands around her chest over his shirt from behind as she huskily whispered almost teasing his senses): Boliye na… do I get to relish my Jaan as my gift… (turning him towards her)
Maan (his eyes were drooping as he was slowly but surely drowning in the feel of his Jaan as her sinful hands traced delicate patterns all over him and he could meekly managed): But…
Geet (loosening his tie before she almost ripped it out and she continued teasing his senses as she very sensually opened his shirt buttons, gently grazing his toned muscles underneath creating a complete havoc in his senses): When did I ask you to do anything Jaan (Maan’s drooping eyes had the questioning look… as to what was her demand then…) I am toh only asking my right to love and savour my Jaan… you are totally free to control yourself and this way it won’t hurt me also…
Maan’s subconscious knew he was asking for trouble by agreeing to her request but somehow he was in no sane state of mind to think or protest anything as his Jaan literally threw his shirt far away feeling his taut chest and abs with her heavenly fingers leaving goose bumps all over his body via her delicate caresses and he could just nod for a yes.
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Her eyes shone in naughtiness as he gently nodded and she softly guided him towards the bed. She pushed him gently on it before climbing over him as her hands roamed freely over his bare chest and back and Maan simply closed his eyes… savouring the feel of his Jaan. Her sinful lips soon took over from her hands as she placed delicate feather like kisses all over him as he moaned her name in sheer ecstasy.
When suddenly he felt something cold touch his bare torso and he opened his eyes slightly to see his Jaan pouring chocolate sauce all over him. He was taken by surprise as her every ready mouth descended on his collar bone sucking, licking and nibbling the chocolate along with his delicate skin leaving her mark… as if marking him hers and he realized what exactly she meant by relishing him as her lips traveled down leaving her marks all over his chest as she softly nibbled and chewed him completely enjoying her chocolaty Maan and relishing him to her heart’s desire and he was completely lost in her feel moaning her name non-stop.
But her heart still yearned for more and she almost ripped out his belt pushing his trousers down in one go. Maan’s eyes literally popped out fearing how much longer he would be able to control as her sinful hands sneaked inside his boxers feeling his secret treasure and he hardened almost instantly as she softly caressed and stroked him. She pushed away his last barrier as her eyes shone in pure passion darkening with desire tracing delicate patters over him and he simply moaned her name in pure bliss.
She very lovingly rubbed his manliness caressing, fondling and rubbing him turning him on and Maan gripped the sheets tightly closing his eyes shut just not able to bear her teasing any more when to his utmost horror he felt her pouring the cold chocolate sauce over his core before her sinful lips and tongue started relishing him while her sinful fingers caressed his sides creating a complete havoc in his senses and his grip tightened on the sheets till his knuckles turned completely white.
Maan (his breathing got rugged as he withered under his Jaan’s extreme sweet torture. Barely managing to speak as a mere hoarse whisper escaped his lips): Please Jaan stop, I am losing my control… I will end up hurting you… please Jaan… (He barely managed to speak as his body almost shivered under his self control… jolting Geet out of her dream land… she didn’t even realize when she got carried so far away in her naughty and sinful plan. She had planned to just tease him but she completely lost her senses relishing her Maan and oops she went a step too far away and poor Maan had it… poor guy was literally trembling in desire.)
And as Geet finally stopped her sweet torture a tear escaped Maan’s eyes simply not able to bear her teasing, his entire being was pulsating and throbbing in need as his heart thudded loudly under his self control.
Geet immediately captured his lips trying to make it up to him but she felt him holding back because he no longer trusted his body, his senses, he knew if he let lose even a fraction then there would be no controlling back when she whispered in his ears.
Geet (faint whisper): Doctor messaged, I am completely fine now.
Maan instantly opened his eyes and looked deep into hers as if confirming what he heard was indeed true, as if seeking her permission and she blinked assuring him as if granting him his right and that was it. He instantly flipped her over, shedding her barriers as he urgently slid in her releasing himself engulfing her in a bone crushing hug, filling her with his love as she almost shrieked in pain and pleasure feeling him inside her and he immediately captured her lips soothing her… trying desperately to calm his quivering senses and it took him a good five minutes before his body finally stopped trembling such was the extreme torture his Jaan had bestowed on him.
Geet (extremely guilty as pearls threatened to fall from her eyes): I am really sorry Maan, I didn’t realize…
But Maan instantly captured her lips not letting her apologize. He looked deep into her eyes… assuring her… that he was her Maan… she had absolutely every right on him… in fact she toh owned him na… and how could she ever say sorry for loving him… he toh just loved it na when she loved him and his eyes smiled at her and finally she too smiled back free from her guilt.
He gently kissed assuring her and soon the soft kiss turned passionate with both biting, nibbling, licking and sucking each other as he slowly increased the pressure underneath and Geet shrieked in pure pleasure as he rocked her world filling her with his true love as they rode amongst the clouds before they both collapsed hitting their climax.
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Maan kissed her lone tear away and she smiled at him totally content to be his and only his when Maan mischievously winked eyeing her and she blushed all the more.
Maan (whispered huskily in her ears): Hmmm, you must be hell tired na so don’t worry I won’t trouble you more (he winked naughtily as he continued) But I will be relishing my Jaan soon (and he eyed her with his bed room eyes and Geet blushed a deep shade of red before hiding her face in his chest)
Geet snuggled into her Maan and he too cocooned her into his loving embrace before a peaceful sleep enveloped them.
As the early morning sun rays glittered inside their room Maan gently blinked his eyes to find the most adorable scene in front of him, his glowing angel was snuggling into him and he was completely lost in openly drooling over his Mishti. He was so lost in his Jaan that he didn’t even realize when he gently kissed her lips and she just snuggled more into him as if seeking his warmth almost wrapping herself around him and Maan smiled slightly.
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When suddenly her soft chest touched his rock solid one and he hardened almost instantly moaning her name.
Geet slowly blinked her eyes hearing him moan and a slight smile crept her lips feeling his arousal while Maan blushed , his body simply gave his crazy love for his Jaan completely away… and hayee… Geet so much adored her slightly blushing Maan as his cheeks went all red.
Geet (huskily whispered in his ears): Love me na Jaan.
Maan looked deep into her eyes and she shied away just not able to meet his intense gaze and soon they both were lost in another love making session exploring each other to their heart’s content.
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Couple of weeks had passed by and Geet was fully recovered now running and jumping all around the mansion.
Today Maan had somehow wrapped up his work by late afternoon itself and he headed home early in order to surprise his Jaan. He was about to announce his arrival when he saw his Mishti looking so gloomy and grumpy that it ripped his heart apart and he tip-toed close to her wanting to know the reason of her faded smile. He saw his Jaan gently caressing a newspaper ad before she let out a sigh and neatly folding the newspaper silently keeping it away even as her eyes had that distant feel of a dream long lost when Dadi called out for her.
Dadi: Geet beta, yahan aana toh jara…(Geet beta, please come here…)
Geet: Ji Dadi…
And she left leaving her sadness behind, maybe even her dreams, for her newly found family. But how was her Maan to let go and he instantly picked up the newspaper to see what his Jaan’s heart desired and a sweet smile crept his lips as he saw her dream and he vowed to fulfill her every wish and he immediately left to find his Jaan’s lost happiness.
It was way past dinner time when Maan finally came back home and both Dadi and Annie had long back retired to bed. As he slowly crept in from the main door he was totally blown away at the mesmerizing scene in front of him. His adorable Jaan was so cutely sleeping on the dining table resting her head on her stretched arm that hayee… he was completely lost in admiring his Mishti as he slowly approached her drooling openly at his innocent wifey. Almost as if in a dreamy trance Maan walked up to his Jaan and gently tucked in the lose strand of hair behind her ear totally smitten by his stunning sweet heart while Geet recognized his touch even in her sleep and she blinked her eyes to see her Maan and a beautiful smile crept her lips.
Geet: Aap aa gaye Maan… Chaliye mu haath dho lijiye, mei khana lagati hoon… (You came Maan… Come wash you face and hands, I will get the food)
And Hayee… Maan was completely blown away by his Jaan’s love and care, she never got angry at him even if he got late at night in fact she would be waiting for him at dinner… hayee… he was so lucky to have his angel in his life.
Maan (softly kissing his wifey): Naraz nahi ho Jaan, (Geet raised her eyebrow surprised) woh I came back so late…
(You are not angry Jaan, (Geet raised her eyebrow surprised) woh I came back so late…)
Geet (how could she ever be angry on her Jaan, her Maan after all he was her Jaan na, reciprocating his kissy): Mei janti hoon you must got caught in some important work tabhi toh you messaged na that you will get late.
(I know that you must have gotten caught in some important work that is why you messaged that you will get late)
Hayee… Maan simply scooped her off her feet as he deepened the kiss wanting to pour his entire love in that one single kiss and both were soon lost in kissing and feeling each other.
They broke apart after ages panting for breath and both chuckled at themselves to be so lost that they just forgot to breathe.
After they calmed a bit Geet was about to go get the dinner when Maan held her hand. She turned around surprised and raised an eyebrow as if asking “Kya hua” (“What happened“).
Maan simply placed a paper in her hand. Geet was curious as to what was in it and as she read the form tears of pure bliss rolled out of her eyes and she engulfed her Maan in a bone crushing bear hug and Maan too engulfed her lovingly.
They broke apart after ages and Geet suddenly became all confused and started bombarding poor Maan with her endless questions.
Geet: But how did you come to know that I wanted to take part in this couple dance competition. I toh didn’t even tell you (when she suddenly realized something) and this was why you got so late (and precious pearls threatened to pour from her divine eyes completely overwhelmed at his truly unconditional love)
Maan simply captured her soft lips not able to bear tears in his precious’s eyes.
Maan (feeling her finally calm down under his magical spell): I toh live in your heart na Jaan then how can I not know your heart’s desire (his voice was full of love as he looked deep into her eyes as if reading her soul and Geet was completely blown away at his absolutely divine love).
Geet (Suddenly worried): But Maan it will become so hectic na for you, how will you be able to manage dance rehearsals along with office. Let’s ditch the competition na, you thought so much that is more than enough for me Jaan. (She said, her eyes showering her absolute love on her Maan and he was totally blown away at her love and care but how could he not fulfil his Jaan’s wish)
Maan (gently shaking his head at his innocent and sweet Jaan, touching her forehead with his, looking deep into her eyes): Mishti… your each and every wish is my heart’s desire so we are not dropping the competition come what may and I promise you Jaan we will excel in it. (Geet tried to interrupt concerned about his health but he didn’t let her cut him) You don’t worry Jaan I will handle the office and worst come worse we won’t take any new project for a couple of months (and Geet was simply lost in his undying love for her as she hugged him truly overwhelmed at his never ending love)
The audition was in a month’s time and both Maan and Geet got down to business. Geet was an awesome choreographer who had knowledge of almost all the dance types in the world and poor Maan would be left scratching his head at the complex names she would keep muttering while trying to decide their opening performance. And finally she came up with some weird and complicated dance form name and Maan was like “what???“
Maan (cribbing, not another weirdo name Babaji): Arey yaar English mei bol na… what was that… Rum… rum… (muttering to himself) Peena tori hai…
(Come on yaar, tell in English… what was that… Rum… rum… (muttering to himself) We don’t have to drink…)
Geet (hitting her head, her business tycoon husband was such a cribbing baby when it came to dance form names): Arey yaar Rum nahi… Rumba (\’r?m-b?) Jaan… it is just a romantic passionate dance if you so want in plain English.
Maan was like phew at last he understood something when his eyes twinkled naughtily “romantic“, “passionate” and he looked at his Jaan with bedroom eyes which was enough to make her go weak in her knees as she blushed a deep shade of red turning away from him just not able to meet this intense gaze.
Maan (placing his chin on her shoulder from behind and whispering huskily in her ears): Mishti, did I ever tell you how “edible” you look in this red blush of yours (and hayee… she blushed all the more if it was even possible)
When suddenly Dadi appeared from nowhere…
Dadi: Oops lagta hai hum galat time par aa gaye (and poor Maaneet instantly separated as a red blush caressed Maan’s cheeks while Geet toh was all sharam se pani pani and could easily beat the tomato in redness hehe . Dadi tried to control her giggling as she continued with a straight face) Arey hum toh aivei hi kabab mei hadi ban gaye (she said winking at them and hayee both were dying blushing ) Acha chalo I won’t tease you guys, I just came to see how the preparations were going on, but you both carry on (she left naughtily winking at them)
(Oops looks like I came at a wrong time (and poor Maaneet instantly separated as a red blush caressed Maan’s cheeks while Geet toh was all sharam se pani pani and could easily beat the tomato in redness hehe . Dadi tried to control her giggling as she continued with a straight face) Oops I unknowingly came in between love birds (she said winking at them and hayee both were dying blushing ) Acha chalo I won’t tease you guys, I just came to see how the preparations were going on, but you both carry on (she left naughtily winking at them))
As Dadi left them alone, Maan naughtily hugged her from behind grazing his hands over her exposed waist and Geet was like “Choriye na Maan koi aa jayega” (“Leave na Maan, someone will come“)
Maan (whispering huskily in her ears gently nibbling her earlobe and her breathe simply got stuck in her throat): I am only practicing our dance form Jaan (Geet was like hell confused even as her breathing became rugged “practicing???” and Maan continued as if answering her unasked question) Haan aur nahi toh kya (What else) you only said romantic and passionate, I am toh just practicing that (and Hayee… Geet blushed completely red hearing her naughty Maan)
And so their romantic and passionate moments continued along with some dance (hehe wink blush ) and soon it was the day of their audition and Geet was hell nervous while her Jaan was trying his best to calm her down.
Geet was pacing up and down in the green room for the past 30 minutes all decked up in the costume frustrating Maan, he was just not able to calm her down today. Finally seeing no other outlet Maan simply captured her soft lips in his rough ones leaving her completely breathless and totally speechless and soon she relaxed under his magical touch.
Anchor: Ramba by Maaneet
Depicting the story of two people destined to be together, how the girl was hesitant initially but finally his unconditional love and persistence prevailed and the soul mates eventually became one.
The host soon called out their name, yeah Maan had purposefully hidden the fact that Mr and Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana were performing as he knew Geet wouldn’t want them to win because of MSK tag rather he wanted to win it for his Jaan just as her Maan.
Maaneet stepped on to the stage and simply set it on fire by their mesmerizing performance.
Ramba By Maaneet – VM by my dearest friend Payal, enjoy their breath-taking dance on Raabta… There is no scope for words in midst their magical performance… hence I leave it to you guys to see and enjoy their astounding dance.
As they finished their performance there was pin drop silence in the whole auditorium before all burst out clapping at their sensuous performance and all were raving about their sizzling chemistry and they got a direct entry in the top fourteen.
They kept on giving spectacular performances week after week and all were simply mesmerized by this perfect Jodi and soon Maaneet were tipped as the favourites to win the contest both by judges and audiences alike.
The final performances were over and Maan was pretty confident that they had nailed it while our Geet was a complete nervous wreck, when the judges announced that for the final day before the results were to be declared based on the marks and votes they wanted all the finalists to give a performance, it could be solo, couple or group whatever they wanted. And an idea clicked Geet and she opted for a solo performance leaving a bewildered Maan scratching his head and when he tried to ask her she confused him all the more.
Maan: Par Jaan why aren’t we performing duet.
Geet (declared): Don’t worry we both are there.
Maan (hell confused ): But how is that possible Jaan, you just opted for solo.
Geet (ruffling his hair): Arey we both will be there in the dance, you just wait and watch. (and left from there leaving a totally baffled Maan behind)
And so was the case the entire week whenever Geet was practicing for the finale dance if Maan would turn up, she would immediately stop dancing and music toh she just played in her ears really frustrating Maan with all this secrecy.
Maan (cribbing once again): Yeh kya baat hoti hai Jaan, tell me na what are you planning and you toh said we both are in the dance.
(This is not fair, tell me na what are you planning and you toh said we both are in the dance.)
Geet (shaking her head): Arey yaar wait for a couple more days na, you will soon come to know (and she winked at him before leaving him all irritated)
And poor Maan finally gave up as he knew it was no use pestering her even though his stomach ached with all the suspense his Jaan had created.
Finally the day arrived for which Maan had been so eagerly waiting and it was Geet’s turn to give the performance.
As she started the act Maan was simply blown away seeing her give a tribute to his unconditional, undying divine love as she danced on “Tujhame rab dikhta hai” which his pictures playing on the background screen.
na kuchh puchha na kuchh maanga, tune dil se diya jo diya
na kuchh bola na kuchh tola, muskura ke diya jo diya
She portrayed his unending and unconditional love via her dance, how he simply lived for her even when she hated him to the core. How he was always there for her come what may. How he always protected her even when she cursed him, how he bore all her abuses, all her accusations, on himself, how he suffered all her hatred yet kept smiling and pouring his absolutely divine love on her.
tu hi dhup tu hi chhaaya, tu hi apana paraya
aur kuchh na janu, bas itna hi janu
She depicted how grateful she was to him to have blessed her life by coming into it, for sucking away all her madness, all her hatred and filling her heart and soul with his pure love.
tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu
tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu
sajde sar jhukta hai, yaara main kya karu
tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu
She worshiped him in her act portraying that he was indeed her Babaji, her guardian angel who had descended from the Heavens just for her and she vowed to reciprocate his undying love with all her might.
rab ne bana di jodi haay…
And as the performance finally came to an end all were speechless while a tear rolled down Maan’s cheek witnessing his Jaan love and he simply jumped on the stage and ran and engulfed her in a bone crushing bear hug. Geet too reciprocated his hug completely lost in her Maan.
And the whole crowd erupted clapping witnessing the pure love of two divine lovers bringing them back to reality still Maan was just not willing to let go of his Jaan.
Geet (feeling embarrassed ): Maan choriya na, sab dekh rahe hai. (Leave na Maan, all are watching)
Maan: Toh dekhane do I don’t care. (So what let them see, I don’t care)
Geet: Please Maan (Geet pleaded all sharam se pani pani )
Finally Maan let go of her but not before placing a kiss on her cheek and she blushed all the more.
Soon they announced that Maaneet had indeed won the prestigious competition and the celebrations knew no bounds as the whole Khurana Mansion was lit up and they celebrated in true grand style like true champions.
And as time passed by the pure love of the divine lovers blossomed and soon Geet gave birth to a cute little boy and they named him “Lucky” on Maan’s suggestion, truly “Lucky Bhaiya” had returned to complete their family and fill their lives with happiness.
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