Will His Love Survive The Turbulent Times Last Part

Last Part

As the days passed by their friendship kept on getting stronger while Maan kept on falling more and more in love with his Gudiya. While Geet was trying desperately to suppress her feelings, her love for him, not wanting to ruin his life any further though her care, concern and longing for him gave it all away.


Soon the semester ended and as usual both their papers went very well and it was time to leave for home. Both were very excited to be with their beloved parents and jumped with joy as they went back home.


Rano and Simran were extremely delighted to have their dear kids back and had made all their favorites and lovingly fed them (or shall I say stuffed them hehe LOL). Raj came home early and they all had a gala time. Mohinder was stuck in a meeting and got a little delayed but as soon as he landed home.


Mohinder: So now we should get them engaged. Tomorrow evening we will hold a very small ceremony with only us family members and get them officially engaged.


Geet was shell shocked and went from there not able to control her emotions. Mohinder thought probably she was shy and let it be. While Raj, Rano, Simran and Maan knew what she must be undergoing, they had thought of talking to her in a day or two, completely unaware that Mohinder would break the news on her like that.


Maan ran behind her. Raj, Rano and Simran thought it would be best if he handled her and in case it didn’t work they were always there to support their kids.


Geet was weeping profusely cursing herself for spoiling his life even more when Maan entered.


Maan (holding her shoulders and turning her to face him): Gudiya. Please don’t cry.


He held her chin and made her look at him wiping her tears.


But as soon as their eyes met Maan died a thousand deaths seeing guilt, self-loathe and misery in her eyes.


Geet (moving away from him): Nahi Maan, mein tumhare layak nahi bachi. I am no longer pure, he ruined me, violated my soul. I am not worthy of you and may never be able to fulfill any of your desires. I can never be complete as a wife.

(No Maan, I am not left worthy of you)


Maan (his voice filled with extreme pain): Gudiya, tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho. Kya tum mujhe itna hi samaj payi ho. Tum mujhe itna gira hua samajti ho. Kya mera pyar itna chota aur swarthi hai? Kya mera pyar is kabil bhi nahi (and he fell on his knees not able to bear her demean his love. His love was the only thing he was ever proud of and his Gudiya thought so low of it that it broke him inside.

(Doll, how can you even think like that? Have you been able to understand me this much only? You think so low of me? Is my love so small and selfish? Is my love not even worthy?)


Geet (falling on her knees cupping his face, feeling guilty of giving him more pain, making him suffer even more): Nahi Maan, you are misunderstanding me. Your love is truly unconditional and divine. It is I who is unworthy of it.


Maan (tears flowing endlessly, shaking his head): Nahi Gudiya. Mere pyaar mein hi koi kami hai jiski wajah se mein tumhara saath bhi nahi paa sakta, nahi toh tum mere payar ko is tarah nahi thukarati, uski aise tauheen nahi karti. (his heart bleed) Mein aisa kya karoon hi tumhe yakeen dila sakoon ki mera pyaar ek dum sacha aur paak hai, ki maine tahe dil se kewal tumhari ibadaat ki hai. (his soul cried in pain) Kaise mein tumhare kabil banoo, mein aisa kya karoon.

(No Doll. They is some flaw in my love only that that can’t even get your companionship, otherwise you won’t have refused my love like this, you wouldn’t have insulted it. (his heart bleed) What should I do to make you believe that my love is true and pure, that I have worshipped you and only you with all my heart. (his soul cried in pain) How do I make myself worthy of you, what should I do)


And he broke down completely, today she broke him by doubting the depth of his limitless love.


Geet (totally devastated at what she had done, she never wanted to belittle his love, rather she didn’t feel herself capable of his truly divine love. But maybe she never realized the depth of the infinite, larger than life, love of his. Hugging him desperately, not able to see him broken like that) Maaannn….. Nahi. Please don’t say this. Your love is pure and absolute. No one can ever love anyone the way you love me. Your love is truly unconditional and selfless. Even God would be overwhelmed to see your divine love and care. Believe me Maan, I didn’t mean to hurt you, it was just that I felt myself responsible for ruining your life and didn’t want to destroy it any more. Please forgive me Maan. I am terribly sorry and I really really love you.


Saying so she crushed him in the hug wanting to suck away all the pain and suffering she had caused him. She rubbed his back and Maan finally relaxed having his Gudiya so near to him. He couldn’t even imagine his life without her. They remained like that for ages calming themselves, absorbing each other’s pain, feeling at peace cocooned in each other’s embrace.


They broke apart after eternity and Geet wiped Maan’s tears.


Geet (she held her ears making a cute sorry baby face): Sorry…


Hayee… How could he not melt for his adorable doll and he immediately held her hands.


Maan (shaking his head): Nahi Gudiya… But promise me you will never ever say those things again. (and she nodded totally blown away by his immensely divine love completely lost in its dept).


Their ring ceremony was held the next day and Rano, Raj and Simran were very happy that Geet had finally let go of her past and was willing to move ahead in life all thanks to the endless love of Maan. Rano was truly indebted to her son for having given his Gudiya a new life and she was sure it would be completely rosy as he would actually carry her in his arms even on burning coal protecting her, not letting any harm come her way.


Both Maan and Geet were very ecstatic to have their soul mate so close to them as they exchanged the rings and were completely lost in each other.


As time passed by Maan and Geet kept on getting closer, they completely adored each other but Maan never tried to cross his limit not even kiss her as he knew she will take time to accept him completely especially physically and he was willing to wait till eternity till his Gudiya truly desired him. Though Geet did desire him but the scars were way too deep to be healed so soon rather it could take an eternity though she tried her best.


3 years later

Soon three years flew by and they were done with their college. Mohinder had got their marriage fixed for the next week. It was Maan and Geet’s 3rd engagement ceremony and Maan had planned a surprise date for her.


Maan had booked her favorite restaurant for a romantic candle lit dinner for two. He left a packet in her room. Geet was surprised to find a gift on her bed and she curiously opened it. It had a note attached to it which read.


Dearest Gudiya,


Will my would be wifey give me the honor to take her out on our first official date on our 3rd engagement anniversary and would she very graciously accept my humble gift and bless me by letting me escort my Goddess in it.


Completely Yours,



Geet was over whelmed at his love and she just kept falling more and more for him. Tears brimmed her eyes as she found her favorite color saree inside. It truly felt as if he lived for her.


In the evening Maan was waiting restlessly for his Gudiya down stairs and as soon as he saw her he was totally mesmerized by her beauty, she truly looked like an angel descending from the heaven only for him and he kept on staring at her with his mouth wide open.


Rano coughed looking at him completely lost and he immediately straightened himself going all red in embarrassment at being caught drooling at his Gudiya by Rano Maa. She patted him winking at him making him blush more.


Geet was also lost in checking him out as he looked drop dead gorgeous in the black tuxedo.


Rano Maa: Take your time kids, we are in no hurry.


Both blushed at her naughtiness and left for their first date hand in hand.


As they reached the restaurant Geet was awestruck and speechless at all the arrangements Maan had done especially for her. He had booked a private enclosure in her favorite restaurant only for the 2 of them and in the center was a royally decorated majestic table set for a very romantic candle lit dinner. The whole section was done up magnificently with red roses and white and purple orchids both of Geet’s favorites and in between there where heart shaped balloons with each alphabet of the below message on each balloon.



Geet was totally blown away by the spectacular arrangement Maan had done for her and she really felt like a princess today.


Maan held out his hand and escorted her to the table and she was completely mesmerized by the whole ambience. There was a beautiful chocolate cake placed there which depicted his divine love in the form of the below message carved on it.








Geet had tears in her eyes looking at his infinite love for her. She should feel blessed for his love and yet he was thanking her, this was the absolute purity of this truly divine love.


Geet instantaneously hugged him as tears flowed from her eyes overwhelmed at his love.


Geet (choking with tears): Maannn…


Maan (worried that he upset his Gudiya): Kya hua Gudiya? I am sorry if I hurt you Jaan… I…


Geet immediately kept her hand on his lips shaking her head. He raised his eyebrow as if asking then why the tears in her eyes?


Geet: Nahi Maan. I am truly honored. I am the one who is blessed with your completely unconditional love.


And she hugged him again just not wanting to let go of him, almost digging in her nails in his back, crushing him afraid as if someone might steal him away from her. Maan gently rubbed her back soothing her as she tried to let go of her insecurities, healing her scared soul.


They broke after ages when Maan felt her finally relax in the hug and he wiped her tears.


Maan (trying to lighten the atmosphere): Would be wifey ji first date par sirf rone ka hi irada hai yaa phir khana khane ka bhi hai or you plan to strave poor me (he winked at her Wink and she wacked his chest gently smiling amidst her tears)

(Would be wifey ji do u plan to only cry on our first date or you wanna have food too or you plan to starve poor me)


He signaled the waiter to lay their food and Geet was overwhelmed at how he had taken care of everything she liked from the food to the gentle romantic music in the background. It was so pleasing that she was completely lost in the absolutely perfect soul in front of her while Maan was totally engrossed in admiring his Gudiya.


A noise outside broke their eye-lock and Geet blushed while Maan chuckled at their condition.


Maan: Gudiya let’s eat out food before it becomes frozen.


They silently ate their food while stealing glances at each other. Both were feeling nervous today, it wasn’t that they hadn’t been out together but somehow the whole romantic setting was making them blush continuously.


Maan was finding it really hard to control his emotions and desires as he saw Geet deliciously lick the chocolate icing of that yummy cake. Oh… how much he wanted to take her plum red lips in his and relish his chocolaty Gudiya while Geet felt butterflies in her stomach looking down not able to meet his piercing gaze.


But Maan was Maan he somehow got a grip on his completely erotic senses and hot ideas and controlled his desires for the sake of his Gudiya. He could feel her getting uncomfortable and straightened himself.


Maan (getting down on his knee, extending his hand): Can I have the pleasure of one dance with my Gudiya.


Geet was totally amazed and speechless at his self control for her sake. His eyes which were an instant ago completely dark in desire and passion were now emoting and pouring pure love on her. Overwhelmed at his divine unconditional love she placed her hand in his.


Soft music started playing in the background


Rab ki qawali hai Ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali hai Ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai Ishq koi
Subah ki laali hai Ishq…
Girta sa jharna hai Ishq koi
Uthta sa kalma hai Ishq koi
Saanson mein lipta hai ishq koi
Aankhon mein dikhta hai Ishq

Mere dil ko tu jaan se juda kar de
Yun bas tu mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu, meri chaal tu
Bas kar aashiqana

Maan held her waist with one hand while his other held her hand. Geet’s free hand was around his neck. They softly moved with the song totally engrossed in each other’s feel gazing into their eyes which reflected pure love.

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Rab ki qawali hai Ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali hai Ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai Ishq koi
Subah ki laali hai Ishq…

Maan and Geet gently swayed with the music slowly getting completely lost in the beautiful lyrics.
Sochu tujhe toh hai subah
Sochu tujhe toh shaam hai

Ho o manzilon pe ab toh meri ek hi tera naam hai
Tere aag me hi jalte, koyle se heera bante
Khwaabon mein aagey chalte hain tujhe batana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana


Maan gently released her and spun her around delicately as if she was actually a porcelain doll before rolling her back into his arms and she hid her face in his chest hugging him dearly blushing profusely.

Saath-saath chalte-chalte haath chhoot jayenge
Aisi raahon mein milo naa
Baatein-baatein karte-karte raat kat jaayegi
Aisi raaton mein milo naa

Kya hum hain, kya Rab hai
Jahaan tu hai wahin sab hai
Tere lab mile mere lab khile
Ab door kya hai jaana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

She crushed him desperately hearing the lyrics never wanting to let go of him while Maan caressed her back lovingly soothing her soul.

Rab ki qawali hai Ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali hai Ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai Ishq koi
Subah ki laali hai Ishq…

Mere dil ko tu jaan se juda kar de
Yun bas tu mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu, meri chaal tu
Bas kar aashiqana

She soon relaxed under his magical touch and as she gazed into his eyes, she was overwhelmed to see her reflection. His supreme love left her speechless and she was lost in the depth of the immense love his soul poured on her.
Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana


She was completely lost in his love coupled with the soothing music and amidst the eye-lock her trembling lips slowly lessened the distance, she so much wanted to let go but just couldn’t close the last inch. Maan could see her desire yet hesitance and he very very gently touched her lips with his. As soon as their lips met sparkles flew and she relaxed under his miraculous touch. Maan kissed her very delicately and Geet was soon lost in the heavenly feel of his. Slowly Maan deepened the kiss very softly sucking her lips pleasuring her senses and finally Geet responded. She was feeling so much at ease under his divine touch and slowly she let go of all her inhibitions and kissed him back. What started as a very tender kiss soon turned passionate with both licking, kissing, nibbling and sucking their lips. Both were completely lost in their paradise exploring each other, finding all the hidden treasures as their tongues danced in a tune of their own.


How about an epilogue guys… Wink
Please press the like button and let me know how you find it.
Eagerly Awaiting…

3 thoughts on “Will His Love Survive The Turbulent Times Last Part

  1. Princessnikita says:

    Awesum update arpi……lovd it….day by day maaneet’s bond getting stronger……geet also having some feelings 4 maan…..par nahi chahti k uske wajah se maan aur suffer kare….geet shockd h uski n maan ki engagement ki baat sun kr…….geet feeling guilty 4 spoiling his life…..maaneet convo was suprb n emotional…….finally geet confessed her love…..maaneet engaged…..maaneet’s 1s date suprb dear……n maaneet’s 1st kiss……

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