Will His Love Survive The Turbulent Times Epilogue


The day of the marriage arrived. Geet was blushing away not knowing how to thank God for sending his best angel for her and she vowed to cherish and reciprocate his love all her life. Maan was over the moon today, he was smiling nonstop. Everything looked so beautiful, the bright sun, the swaying trees, the smiling flowers, he felt as if even nature was rejoicing in his happiness. His Gudiya had accepted his love and she would soon be his wife. Oh… he felt so honored and blessed to be loved by his angel.


As Maan awaited his Gudiya at the mandap he was getting really fidgety and desperate to get one glimpse of his Jaan and shuffled impatiently. Rano and Simran giggled at his restlessness while Raj teased him.


Raj (with a straight face whispering in his ears): Maan beta, kya hua, why are so anxious? (Maan beta, what happened, why are so anxious?)


Maan lowered his face all red in embarrassment at his desperation to see his Gudiya while Raj chuckled making him blush more.


Soon Geet got ready in her bridal ware and descended down the stairs. Maan looked at her and he was totally smitten by her beauty. Oh… she looked so majestic and heavenly today that even angels would be jealous of his Gudiya. He was completely lost in her splendor drooling at her with his mouth wide open.


Raj (teasing him seeing his state): Bas tora sa aur intejaar beta ji, Geet will be your wife soon and then you can legally drool over her. (Just a little more wait Beta ji, Geet will be your wife soon and then you can legally drool over her)


Maan was completely flushed at being caught by his father drooling so openly at his Gudiya. He lowered his eyes turning crimson red blushing at his dad’s teasing.


Rano: Arey, why are you teasing our Beta, he already has my permission to admire his Gudiya after all they just finished their first official date.


Maan (totally red now… remembering their first kiss… not able to take their teasing… he made a baby face): Rano Maa, aap bhi… (and he turned his face a little away but was still admiring his Gudiya from the corner of his eyes and all chuckled seeing his desperation)


As Geet reached the mandap, Rano Maa helped Geet settle comfortably next to Maan. Maan was totally mesmerized by his Gudiya while Geet too felt butterflies in her stomach absolutely lost in Maan who looked no less than a prince.


It was the time to exchange the garlands and all the relatives and friends were betting on who would bend down first. They even tried to lifted Maan up in an attempt to not let Geet put the garland but how could Maan bear to see his Gudiya lose and he raised his hand to stop them and gently bowed his head in front of his angel not caring about the boos from boys while the girls cheered him on.

Geet was totally over whelmed by his love and placed the garland around his neck and bowed her head slightly as he made her wear the garland. Witnessing their pure love and respect for each other, all left bad to have booed Maan and cheered them whole heartedly totally mesmerized by their divine love for one other.


Panditji started receipting the mantras for the pheras and Maan was ahead for the first four while Geet was in front for the remaining three. As they held their hands while taking pheras around the sacred fired, they vowed to remain with each other through thick and thin showering their love on the other truly and unconditionally till eternity.


Their parents showered rose petals on them as they became husband and wife pledging to love each other forever in front of the divine power. They took the blessing from their elders and then it was time for Geet’s bidai. All had tears in their eyes but they knew she was going only next door and Rano knew that Maan would leave no stone unturned to keep his Gudiya happy. She was truly overwhelmed at his divine love for his Gudiya, how he gave the ultimate sacrifice of not only his body, heart and soul but he even let go of his self-respect to the extent of being humiliated by one and all yet bored it all silently just for her. She just couldn’t thank God enough to have blessed her daughter with a soul mate as true and pure as Maan.


As Maan and Geet entered Khurana mansion, Simran was all ready with the aarti thaal and she welcomed them with all the rituals. All the relatives cornered Maan as Simran took Geet along with her upstairs to their bedroom. The bedroom was decorated but very slightly on Maan’s insistence as he didn’t want Geet to feel awkward. After some time Maan somehow managed to free himself from the crowd and ran away from them even as they teased him for being so desperate to be alone with his wife.


Maan entered the room and was mesmerized to find Geet sitting on the bed with her veil down hugging her knees. He walked in trance completely lost in her aura but as he reached to lift her ghoonghat he somehow composed himself as he knew she would not be ready to take their relationship forward after the heart wrenching trauma she had undergone.

As he sat beside her he tried to get a grip on his erotic senses and very gently lifted her Ghoonghat. Oh… she looked heavenly… yes she was truly an angel who had descended from the skies just for him.


Maan (sensing that she was extremely nervous): Gudiya you change, all these functions must have been extremely tiresome for you. I will also change. Then let’s sleep (he said with a calm and composed voice, flashing his mesmerizing smile at his doll).


Geet (she knew he would never show it but she was well aware of his desires. She no longer wanted him to suffer due to her dreadful past in fact she too wanted to come out of that night mare): Love me Maan. Please cleanize my body, purify my soul, I want to be blessed by your touch Maan. I want to scrap away all the bad memories and re-write my destiny with you. Please make me yours so that I can cherish these moments all life long. Mark me as yours and only yours.


Geet voiced her desperation, she truly wanted to live again today. She wanted to feel alive in the arms of her savior. Maan could see her trembling, he knew she wasn’t sure if she could accept any touch again but he was blown away by the amount of trust she had on him that he would be able to make her overcome her ordeal.


Maan very delicately removed her mang tikka kissing her forehead gently. He then very carefully removed her ear rings licking her ear lobes teasing her senses. Geet closed her eyes losing herself under his divine touch. He next removed her necklace replacing it with soft kisses all along her neck line. He slowly removed her bangles placing delicate kisses along her hands and replaced her payals worshipping her feet via his lips. He gently caressed her waist removing the waist band sending shivers down her body with his magical touch and feather-like kisses.


18 + part begin

Maan slowly removed her Chunni and she shuffled a bit. He knew how difficult it must be for her and he held her chin making her face him. She assured him via her eyes that she was absolutely fine and truly wanted him to love her. He very gently opened the hooks of her Choli and her breathing became erotic and nervousness overtook her. He tenderly held her hands and directed her to open his Sherwani buttons so as to calm her a bit. He softly removed her cloth while guiding her to remove his. He kept her hands on his bare chest wanting her to feel him and soon she was lost in his Greek God like physic admiring his absolutely scintillating body. She softy ran her fingers over his taut chest and perfect abs, desire slowly creeping in her. He inhaled sharply as his Gudiya caressed his bare chest and abs with her delicate fingers losing himself under her touch.


He unhooked her bra and gently laid her down covering them in the sheet. He very affectionately folded her asserts, massaging and caressing them passionately creating havoc in her senses. He soon replaced his hands with his lips and softly sucked at her peeked Ni*****. He very lovingly licked, sucked, nibbled her br***** while his fingers drew soothing patterns on her tummy and goose bumps erupted all over her body as he gently caressed her. He very passionately yet delicately showered his pure love on her asserts and she was lost in his magical spell, moaning his name in desire, gripping the sheets tightly.


He shifted his attention to her waist placing soft wet kisses all along teasing her senses. As he licked and nibbled her navel she moaned his name loudly ‘Maaannn’ not able to bear his teasing anymore and Maan immediately captured her lips in his and she bit his lower lip sharply trying to get a grip on her erotic senses and complaining about his sweet torture, before licking up the blood. They both were completely lost in their passionate kiss sucking, nibbling and licking each other while their tongues competed in a match of their own exploring all the hidden treasures, feeling the various flavors, loving one another.


They broke after eternity both grasping for oxygen. Maan could feel her little uncomfortable though desire was building up in her but there was still that restlessness as if she feared what would happen next. Maan kissed her eyes urging her to look into his. As they made eye-contact Maan seeked her permission to love her and she lowered her gaze truly wanting to be his today, longing to be freed from those horrifying images.


Maan removed his pajama and her langa and placed soft wet kisses along her tender legs while gently caressing her inner thighs. He soon replaced his delicate fingers with his lips kissing, licking and nibbling her softly creating complete havoc in her senses. He could feel her wetness from above her panties and very gently removed the last piece of clothing letting his fingers slowly caress her along the length of her body teasing her senses.


He placed delicate feather-like kisses worshipping her hidden treasure while his fingers delicately grazed her sides sending shivers down her spine. He gently kissed her opening and licked it making her moan his name in pure pleasure. He sucked slightly before entering her with his tongue licking, kissing and sucking her divine nectar as if depicting how pure and holy she was. He very gently caressed her inside with his tongue taking her to a land of absolute pleasure. She shrieked his name in pure desire as he licked her insides not able to control it any more.


Geet (gripping his hair tightly not able to bear his sweet torture, her voice loaded with desire): Maan please make me yours.


Maan was truly honored to have her desire him the same way like he always did and he removed the last bit of barrier between them and very carefully and gently he glided in her making sure to not hurt her even a wee bit while he captured her lips in his in an enthralling kiss. He very delicately increased the pressure making sure she was with him. When he was sure she was enjoying his slight movements, he fastened the thrusts keeping her with him all the way rocking her world, pleasuring her senses, truly loving her till they both hit their climax.


He rested on her lightly still inside her as they slowly tried to calm their raised breathing and erotic senses. As he tried to withdraw from her she stopped him.


Geet: Nahi Maan, let me feel you inside me for some time.


Maan felt overwhelmed witnessing her love and instantaneously captured her lips taking her to a ride amongst the clouds and they kept on kissing each other as if there was no tomorrow. Geet took the initiative for the first time to lovingly caress his bare back and very sensuously touched his back side and she instantaneous felt his hardness erect inside her. She truly felt blessed today to be loved by her savior. He was her angel who had wiped out every bit of sadness from her life who had sacrificed his entire being just to redeem her. She was truly grateful for his guardian angel to have erased each and every memory of that horrible and dreadful nightmare replacing it with his pure divine absolutely unconditional and selfless love. He had washed away all the sinful violation she had felt and filled her body, heart and soul with his limitless love. He had completely white washed her dreadful past today leaving her with only cherishable and divine memories.


Maan gently withdrew himself and Geet made herself comfortable on his bare chest almost wrapping herself around his body entangling her legs with his. She wanted to shower him with all the love she had received wanting to pleasure him, caress him, love him and treasure him. She very lovingly caressed his bare body pleasuring his senses.


Geet: Maan, I am sure even heaven cannot be as true and as divine as your love is. (placing soft kisses in his chest). I truly had the time of my life and I am forever indebted to you for always being there for me.


Maan tried to say something but he just couldn’t under the sweet torture of his angel whose sinful hands were very delicately loving him slowly inching downwards while her rose-petal like lips placing soft wet kisses along his chest.


Geet: Please love me like this always Maan, I just don’t exist without you. Don’t leave me ever, Jaan.


Maan (whispered hoarsely amidst his totally erotic breathing as she created havoc in his senses by her delicate touch): Never…


Geet touched his manhood and she could clearly feel his arousal as he instantly hardened at her touch. She very gently caressed it and he moaned in pure desire “Gudiya…


Geet felt his hesitation, she knew he so much desired to love her but yet was holding himself just for her sake, caging his desires for his concern about her.


Geet: Love me Maan, I wanna be yours.


That was all that he needed and flipped her over but gently. She was amazed at how much control he had on himself, how much love and concern he had for her and she wondered what good deed had she done to be blessed by his unconditional love.


He delicately glided in her and she was so much more comfortable by now. He fastened his movements inside finding the perfect rhythm pleasuring her senses and soon they both rode amongst the clouds in divine pleasure hitting their climax. They both collapsed completely exhausted and soon fell asleep cocooned in each other’s loving embrace as they truly became one today.


18+ part ends


His truly unconditional love had survived all the turbulent times. His eternal love had crossed all the barriers, overcome all the obstacles and he had finally managed to bring his Gudiya back from the black hole of darkness which had threatened to consume her heart and soul. Today they became one soul and they lived happily ever after cocooned in each other embrace loving one another with utmost zeal and loyalty and soon their family was complete when Geet gave birth to a beautiful baby boy whom they name “Amanat” as she truly felt it was the gift of Maan’s divine, noble, selfless and absolutely unconditional love.


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Will His Love Survive The Turbulent Times Last Part

Last Part

As the days passed by their friendship kept on getting stronger while Maan kept on falling more and more in love with his Gudiya. While Geet was trying desperately to suppress her feelings, her love for him, not wanting to ruin his life any further though her care, concern and longing for him gave it all away.


Soon the semester ended and as usual both their papers went very well and it was time to leave for home. Both were very excited to be with their beloved parents and jumped with joy as they went back home.


Rano and Simran were extremely delighted to have their dear kids back and had made all their favorites and lovingly fed them (or shall I say stuffed them hehe LOL). Raj came home early and they all had a gala time. Mohinder was stuck in a meeting and got a little delayed but as soon as he landed home.


Mohinder: So now we should get them engaged. Tomorrow evening we will hold a very small ceremony with only us family members and get them officially engaged.


Geet was shell shocked and went from there not able to control her emotions. Mohinder thought probably she was shy and let it be. While Raj, Rano, Simran and Maan knew what she must be undergoing, they had thought of talking to her in a day or two, completely unaware that Mohinder would break the news on her like that.


Maan ran behind her. Raj, Rano and Simran thought it would be best if he handled her and in case it didn’t work they were always there to support their kids.


Geet was weeping profusely cursing herself for spoiling his life even more when Maan entered.


Maan (holding her shoulders and turning her to face him): Gudiya. Please don’t cry.


He held her chin and made her look at him wiping her tears.


But as soon as their eyes met Maan died a thousand deaths seeing guilt, self-loathe and misery in her eyes.


Geet (moving away from him): Nahi Maan, mein tumhare layak nahi bachi. I am no longer pure, he ruined me, violated my soul. I am not worthy of you and may never be able to fulfill any of your desires. I can never be complete as a wife.

(No Maan, I am not left worthy of you)


Maan (his voice filled with extreme pain): Gudiya, tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho. Kya tum mujhe itna hi samaj payi ho. Tum mujhe itna gira hua samajti ho. Kya mera pyar itna chota aur swarthi hai? Kya mera pyar is kabil bhi nahi (and he fell on his knees not able to bear her demean his love. His love was the only thing he was ever proud of and his Gudiya thought so low of it that it broke him inside.

(Doll, how can you even think like that? Have you been able to understand me this much only? You think so low of me? Is my love so small and selfish? Is my love not even worthy?)


Geet (falling on her knees cupping his face, feeling guilty of giving him more pain, making him suffer even more): Nahi Maan, you are misunderstanding me. Your love is truly unconditional and divine. It is I who is unworthy of it.


Maan (tears flowing endlessly, shaking his head): Nahi Gudiya. Mere pyaar mein hi koi kami hai jiski wajah se mein tumhara saath bhi nahi paa sakta, nahi toh tum mere payar ko is tarah nahi thukarati, uski aise tauheen nahi karti. (his heart bleed) Mein aisa kya karoon hi tumhe yakeen dila sakoon ki mera pyaar ek dum sacha aur paak hai, ki maine tahe dil se kewal tumhari ibadaat ki hai. (his soul cried in pain) Kaise mein tumhare kabil banoo, mein aisa kya karoon.

(No Doll. They is some flaw in my love only that that can’t even get your companionship, otherwise you won’t have refused my love like this, you wouldn’t have insulted it. (his heart bleed) What should I do to make you believe that my love is true and pure, that I have worshipped you and only you with all my heart. (his soul cried in pain) How do I make myself worthy of you, what should I do)


And he broke down completely, today she broke him by doubting the depth of his limitless love.


Geet (totally devastated at what she had done, she never wanted to belittle his love, rather she didn’t feel herself capable of his truly divine love. But maybe she never realized the depth of the infinite, larger than life, love of his. Hugging him desperately, not able to see him broken like that) Maaannn….. Nahi. Please don’t say this. Your love is pure and absolute. No one can ever love anyone the way you love me. Your love is truly unconditional and selfless. Even God would be overwhelmed to see your divine love and care. Believe me Maan, I didn’t mean to hurt you, it was just that I felt myself responsible for ruining your life and didn’t want to destroy it any more. Please forgive me Maan. I am terribly sorry and I really really love you.


Saying so she crushed him in the hug wanting to suck away all the pain and suffering she had caused him. She rubbed his back and Maan finally relaxed having his Gudiya so near to him. He couldn’t even imagine his life without her. They remained like that for ages calming themselves, absorbing each other’s pain, feeling at peace cocooned in each other’s embrace.


They broke apart after eternity and Geet wiped Maan’s tears.


Geet (she held her ears making a cute sorry baby face): Sorry…


Hayee… How could he not melt for his adorable doll and he immediately held her hands.


Maan (shaking his head): Nahi Gudiya… But promise me you will never ever say those things again. (and she nodded totally blown away by his immensely divine love completely lost in its dept).


Their ring ceremony was held the next day and Rano, Raj and Simran were very happy that Geet had finally let go of her past and was willing to move ahead in life all thanks to the endless love of Maan. Rano was truly indebted to her son for having given his Gudiya a new life and she was sure it would be completely rosy as he would actually carry her in his arms even on burning coal protecting her, not letting any harm come her way.


Both Maan and Geet were very ecstatic to have their soul mate so close to them as they exchanged the rings and were completely lost in each other.


As time passed by Maan and Geet kept on getting closer, they completely adored each other but Maan never tried to cross his limit not even kiss her as he knew she will take time to accept him completely especially physically and he was willing to wait till eternity till his Gudiya truly desired him. Though Geet did desire him but the scars were way too deep to be healed so soon rather it could take an eternity though she tried her best.


3 years later

Soon three years flew by and they were done with their college. Mohinder had got their marriage fixed for the next week. It was Maan and Geet’s 3rd engagement ceremony and Maan had planned a surprise date for her.


Maan had booked her favorite restaurant for a romantic candle lit dinner for two. He left a packet in her room. Geet was surprised to find a gift on her bed and she curiously opened it. It had a note attached to it which read.


Dearest Gudiya,


Will my would be wifey give me the honor to take her out on our first official date on our 3rd engagement anniversary and would she very graciously accept my humble gift and bless me by letting me escort my Goddess in it.


Completely Yours,



Geet was over whelmed at his love and she just kept falling more and more for him. Tears brimmed her eyes as she found her favorite color saree inside. It truly felt as if he lived for her.


In the evening Maan was waiting restlessly for his Gudiya down stairs and as soon as he saw her he was totally mesmerized by her beauty, she truly looked like an angel descending from the heaven only for him and he kept on staring at her with his mouth wide open.


Rano coughed looking at him completely lost and he immediately straightened himself going all red in embarrassment at being caught drooling at his Gudiya by Rano Maa. She patted him winking at him making him blush more.


Geet was also lost in checking him out as he looked drop dead gorgeous in the black tuxedo.


Rano Maa: Take your time kids, we are in no hurry.


Both blushed at her naughtiness and left for their first date hand in hand.


As they reached the restaurant Geet was awestruck and speechless at all the arrangements Maan had done especially for her. He had booked a private enclosure in her favorite restaurant only for the 2 of them and in the center was a royally decorated majestic table set for a very romantic candle lit dinner. The whole section was done up magnificently with red roses and white and purple orchids both of Geet’s favorites and in between there where heart shaped balloons with each alphabet of the below message on each balloon.



Geet was totally blown away by the spectacular arrangement Maan had done for her and she really felt like a princess today.


Maan held out his hand and escorted her to the table and she was completely mesmerized by the whole ambience. There was a beautiful chocolate cake placed there which depicted his divine love in the form of the below message carved on it.








Geet had tears in her eyes looking at his infinite love for her. She should feel blessed for his love and yet he was thanking her, this was the absolute purity of this truly divine love.


Geet instantaneously hugged him as tears flowed from her eyes overwhelmed at his love.


Geet (choking with tears): Maannn…


Maan (worried that he upset his Gudiya): Kya hua Gudiya? I am sorry if I hurt you Jaan… I…


Geet immediately kept her hand on his lips shaking her head. He raised his eyebrow as if asking then why the tears in her eyes?


Geet: Nahi Maan. I am truly honored. I am the one who is blessed with your completely unconditional love.


And she hugged him again just not wanting to let go of him, almost digging in her nails in his back, crushing him afraid as if someone might steal him away from her. Maan gently rubbed her back soothing her as she tried to let go of her insecurities, healing her scared soul.


They broke after ages when Maan felt her finally relax in the hug and he wiped her tears.


Maan (trying to lighten the atmosphere): Would be wifey ji first date par sirf rone ka hi irada hai yaa phir khana khane ka bhi hai or you plan to strave poor me (he winked at her Wink and she wacked his chest gently smiling amidst her tears)

(Would be wifey ji do u plan to only cry on our first date or you wanna have food too or you plan to starve poor me)


He signaled the waiter to lay their food and Geet was overwhelmed at how he had taken care of everything she liked from the food to the gentle romantic music in the background. It was so pleasing that she was completely lost in the absolutely perfect soul in front of her while Maan was totally engrossed in admiring his Gudiya.


A noise outside broke their eye-lock and Geet blushed while Maan chuckled at their condition.


Maan: Gudiya let’s eat out food before it becomes frozen.


They silently ate their food while stealing glances at each other. Both were feeling nervous today, it wasn’t that they hadn’t been out together but somehow the whole romantic setting was making them blush continuously.


Maan was finding it really hard to control his emotions and desires as he saw Geet deliciously lick the chocolate icing of that yummy cake. Oh… how much he wanted to take her plum red lips in his and relish his chocolaty Gudiya while Geet felt butterflies in her stomach looking down not able to meet his piercing gaze.


But Maan was Maan he somehow got a grip on his completely erotic senses and hot ideas and controlled his desires for the sake of his Gudiya. He could feel her getting uncomfortable and straightened himself.


Maan (getting down on his knee, extending his hand): Can I have the pleasure of one dance with my Gudiya.


Geet was totally amazed and speechless at his self control for her sake. His eyes which were an instant ago completely dark in desire and passion were now emoting and pouring pure love on her. Overwhelmed at his divine unconditional love she placed her hand in his.


Soft music started playing in the background


Rab ki qawali hai Ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali hai Ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai Ishq koi
Subah ki laali hai Ishq…
Girta sa jharna hai Ishq koi
Uthta sa kalma hai Ishq koi
Saanson mein lipta hai ishq koi
Aankhon mein dikhta hai Ishq

Mere dil ko tu jaan se juda kar de
Yun bas tu mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu, meri chaal tu
Bas kar aashiqana

Maan held her waist with one hand while his other held her hand. Geet’s free hand was around his neck. They softly moved with the song totally engrossed in each other’s feel gazing into their eyes which reflected pure love.

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Rab ki qawali hai Ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali hai Ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai Ishq koi
Subah ki laali hai Ishq…

Maan and Geet gently swayed with the music slowly getting completely lost in the beautiful lyrics.
Sochu tujhe toh hai subah
Sochu tujhe toh shaam hai

Ho o manzilon pe ab toh meri ek hi tera naam hai
Tere aag me hi jalte, koyle se heera bante
Khwaabon mein aagey chalte hain tujhe batana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana


Maan gently released her and spun her around delicately as if she was actually a porcelain doll before rolling her back into his arms and she hid her face in his chest hugging him dearly blushing profusely.

Saath-saath chalte-chalte haath chhoot jayenge
Aisi raahon mein milo naa
Baatein-baatein karte-karte raat kat jaayegi
Aisi raaton mein milo naa

Kya hum hain, kya Rab hai
Jahaan tu hai wahin sab hai
Tere lab mile mere lab khile
Ab door kya hai jaana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

She crushed him desperately hearing the lyrics never wanting to let go of him while Maan caressed her back lovingly soothing her soul.

Rab ki qawali hai Ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali hai Ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali hai Ishq koi
Subah ki laali hai Ishq…

Mere dil ko tu jaan se juda kar de
Yun bas tu mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu, meri chaal tu
Bas kar aashiqana

She soon relaxed under his magical touch and as she gazed into his eyes, she was overwhelmed to see her reflection. His supreme love left her speechless and she was lost in the depth of the immense love his soul poured on her.
Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana

Tere waaste mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana
Mera Ishq Sufiyana


She was completely lost in his love coupled with the soothing music and amidst the eye-lock her trembling lips slowly lessened the distance, she so much wanted to let go but just couldn’t close the last inch. Maan could see her desire yet hesitance and he very very gently touched her lips with his. As soon as their lips met sparkles flew and she relaxed under his miraculous touch. Maan kissed her very delicately and Geet was soon lost in the heavenly feel of his. Slowly Maan deepened the kiss very softly sucking her lips pleasuring her senses and finally Geet responded. She was feeling so much at ease under his divine touch and slowly she let go of all her inhibitions and kissed him back. What started as a very tender kiss soon turned passionate with both licking, kissing, nibbling and sucking their lips. Both were completely lost in their paradise exploring each other, finding all the hidden treasures as their tongues danced in a tune of their own.


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Will His Love Survive The Turbulent Times Part 10

Part 10 (Second Last Part)

Geet was trying her best to come out of her shell, she would herself take the initiative to go out on long drives and shopping along with Maan and under the limitless and unconditional love and care of Maan she was recovering much faster now. Rano, Simran and Raj were very happy to see her finally getting better and they too tried their best to keep their children happy, helping them in forgetting their nightmare, healing their mental and emotional scars.


Their holidays came to an end and it was time to join back college. Geet was a bit nervous and scared of having to move back to the hostel but she tried to hide her discomfort not wanting to hurt Maan any further. Geet had been really shaken when she had seen him break down like that in the cinema hall. But how could she ever hide anything from him. Before they left Maan cupped her face making her look into his eyes which just poured absolutely divine love on her.


Geet was completely lost in his eyes witnessing only pure love in them for her.


Maan (in pain seeing her suffer silently, comforting her): Gudiya, I will always be around you. You don’t worry, I will never ever leave you alone come what may.


She nodded as if assuring him that she completely trusted him and hugged him to soothe him while feeling protected in his embrace.


Maan had become over protective about his Gudiya and didn’t leave her alone even for a second in the campus and was with her all day long till it was time for her hostel to get locked. After that also he would call her or chat with her on the campus LAN till she slept. He would be the one to wake her up each morning via his good morning call and would be waiting outside her hostel longing for one glimpse of his angel. Geet felt at peace having her savior around her always and was now much more at ease and comfortable interacting with her friends. She was truly grateful to him for being there for her always at any cost.


One day it was raining very heavily outside and as usual at 10 in the night Maan called up Geet as he didn’t find her online on the college network, in fact she had been away since half an hour and he was feeling really restless. But to his utter horror her mobile was switched off. Maan felt the ground collapse under his feet and his heart stopped beating. He somehow got a grip on himself and rushed out of his hostel in the white T-shirt and black tracks he was wearing. He didn’t care one bit that it was pouring heavily and just rushed towards Geet’s hostel. It was around three km distance and he ran so fast that he covered the distance within five minutes. He reached below her hostel panting hard and completely drenched trying to figure out a way to reach her room.


It was then that he saw a tree on the outer wall and he climbed on it using it to leap over the spiked part of the wall. But as he was jumping over the barbed wire he hurt his leg and it started bleeding but he kept on with his mission and jumped down falling hard. He had now entered the hostel campus, but he didn’t even once think about the consequences. If he got caught, he would be rusticated from college but when it came to his Gudiya did he even think about himself.


Geet had once pointed to her room window when they were walking to her hostel so he tried to find a way to reach up there. He saw a pipe nearby and started climbing, it was extremely dangerous as the pipe had become very slippery owing to the heavy down pour but he somehow kept on climbing in spite of his slipping grip. With great difficulty he managed to climb the pipe and somehow held on to her balcony railing, hanging down from it.


Then he saw his Gudiya, his Jaan sitting in her room totally engrossed in the computer project she was making. She was making cute faces depicting her various moods first angry, then suddenly jumping with joy, then totally frustrated depending on how her work was coming along all the time working on her lappie. Maan was completely lost in her and her cute antics. Oh… she looked so adorable, she was truly his Gudiya, so cute, so pure, so innocent and he just kept on staring at her totally oblivious to his surroundings. He jerked out of his dreaming session as his hand almost slipped from the railing and he was on the verge of falling.


Maan chuckled at himself, how he was hanging for his dear life, getting completely drenched and yet only admiring his Gudiya. He jumped up and got inside the balcony.


Maan (didn’t want to startle Geet and hence called out to her softly): Geet…


But she was completely engrossed in her project and didn’t respond. Not knowing how to gain her attention Maan knocked on the balcony door. Geet was shocked to hear a knock from the balcony door and jerked up frightened. But as soon as she realized it was Maan she calmed down a bit but then she burst at him in anger.


Geet (opening the balcony door and literally dragging in Maan who was dripping from head to toe scolding him): Have you lost your mind? What were you even thinking venturing out in this weather? Look at yourself you are completely drenched, it is raining cats and dogs outside.


She suddenly realized he was inside girls hostel and she screamed rushing to lock her room door in case someone barged in. Maan was completely lost in his Gudiya following her each move.


Geet (screaming at him all red in anger): Have you gone nuts Maan, this is girl’s hostel. You can be rusticated if someone found out you entered the premises of the hostel (when she still didn’t hear any reply from him, she held his shoulders and shook him up) What were you thinking? (Maan was totally engrossed in his Gudiya, he was ecstatic to have his angry bubbly Geet back. Oh… how much he loved it when she scolded him like she owned him. Here Geet felt him all wet and rushed to get a towel from her cupboard. Geet wrapped his head in the towel and shook him vigorously trying to dry his hair up, finally jerking him out of his dream land) Have you gone completely mad, Maan. Don’t just stand here like a statue, damn it. I am asking you something, answer me back.


Maan (holding her hands before she literally ripped his head off in an attempt to dry him up): Shh… relax Gudiya… calm down… take in deep breathes.


Geet very innocently followed his advice actually taking in long deep breathes when he chuckled at how cutely she was following and how adorable she looked that he pulled her cheeks while she wacked him for making a complete fool of her.


Geet (in total angry form): Maaannn…..


And he ran around the room trying to dodge his angry Gudiya who was throwing all kinds of stuff at him, pen, pencil, pillow, towel whatever she could lay her hands on. They kept running around until Geet finally stopped all tired and out of breathe. Maan went to his Gudiya giggling looking at her condition.


Geet: Now at least tell me Maan what happened, why did you rush here?


Maan simply took her mobile lying on the bed and put it for charging switching it on. It was then she realized that she wasn’t on LAN as she was busy in her project and even her cell was switched off. She couldn’t even imagine what he must have undergone at that time just not able to contact her.


Her eyes brimmed with tears as to how much he loved and cared for her that he ran in that horrible weather and not caring on bit of the consequences of getting caught, he risked his reputation, his carrier, his life, everything in order to reach out to her, to ensure her safety.


She was over whelmed with emotion and hugged him tight, truly grateful to him for being there always for her. She could never thank God enough for gifting her with Maan who truly and absolutely lived only for her.


Maan (gently rubbed her back, understanding how guilty she must be feeling): Nahi Gudiya, don’t worry, it’s not your fault and see I am perfectly fine.


All became quiet outside, the thunderstorm ended as if it was depicting the peace Maan and Geet felt cocooned in each other’s embrace. They remained like that till eternity feeling each other’s heart beats.


After ages Maan reluctantly broke the hug to take a look at his Gudiya, to see if she was feeling better now. Geet was feeling relaxed now though she was also completely wet by now but little did she care.


Geet: Maan you should leave now it is really risky anyone can come and you should change into dry clothes as soon as possible else you would catch cold.


Maan nodded over whelmed at how much his Gudiya cared for him.


Maan: You also change, see I made you wet as well (he said sheepishly and she smiled. Hayee… Maan was completely lost in his Gudiya’s angelic smile)


With a very heavy heart Maan left from there while Geet kept on looking at him, praying for his safety as he climbed those deadly barbed wires and spikes. He waved to her as he crossed the hostel premises and she too waved back as he left for his hostel.


But obviously he had caught a deadly cold as he woke up the next morning and was sneezing continuously and his nose was all red. He tried to not sneeze during the good morning call but Geet could clearly see through all his weird and absurd excuses for his hoarse voice and ordered him to reach the sick room of their campus. While she made Kadha for him in her hostel mess and went there.


She very affectionately took care of him whole day long while was completely lost in his Gudiya’s immense concern for him. He was much better as the day ended all thanks to Geet’s infinite efforts. 
Maan was truly hopeful he would be able to get his old Gudiya back and that one day she would be able to reciprocate his love with same vigor.


As the days passed by their friendship kept on getting stronger while Maan kept on falling more and more in love with his Gudiya. While Geet was trying desperately to suppress her feelings, her love for him, not wanting to ruin his life any further though her care, concern and longing for him gave it all away.


To Be Continued… Last Part

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